Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Second Chance at College
The story opens with reports about Jonty, murders, and erased footage, then turns back to his arrival at college. He moves into a shared house with Zauna, Pete, and Amber.
Key Events
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Jonty's Troubling Reputation — An account calls Jonty a liar and cheat, while also describing him as a friend. Characters: Jonty
Location: Unspecified
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Reports of Murders — News reports mention a devastating local event and several murders. Characters: Jonty
Location: Unspecified
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Footage Mysteriously Erased — Footage from the night of the murders has mysteriously been erased. Characters: Jonty
Location: Unspecified
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College Arrival — The narrative turns back to Jonty arriving at college and calling it a second chance. Characters: Jonty
Location: College
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Household Begins — Jonty moves in with Zauna, Pete, and Amber. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Pete, Amber
Location: Shared house
The House Becomes Content
Zauna films strange household incidents while Jonty turns their experiences into material for his growing audience. Unusual calls and device activity prompt talk of a ghost, though the group does not settle on an explanation.
Key Events
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Zauna Films the House — Zauna films the household and its strange incidents. Characters: Zauna, Jonty
Location: Shared house
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Jonty Builds an Audience — Jonty turns the household's experiences into material for a growing online audience. Characters: Jonty
Location: Shared house
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Strange Calls and Devices — Odd call patterns and unexplained phone and laptop activity fuel talk of a ghost. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Pete
Location: Shared house
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Demand for More Cameras — Jonty wants more cameras and dramatic footage; Zauna wants to record events and Pete remains skeptical. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Pete
Location: Shared house
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Becky Joins the Situation — Becky tries to help and becomes involved as the supposed haunting grows more dangerous. Characters: Becky Dubar, Jonty
Location: Unspecified
Fame Raises the Stakes
Jonty pushes for more dramatic events as Becky becomes involved and Ilana warns about what ghosts might do. Amber urges Jonty to leave, but his online commitments and the story's momentum keep the group entangled.
Key Events
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Ilana Warns the Group — Ilana warns that ghosts may use people as batteries, but explanations remain uncertain. Characters: Ilana Clark, Jonty
Location: Unspecified
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Extreme Events Proposed — Jonty pushes for increasingly extreme events and proposes a party to raise Dawn from the dead. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Pete, Amber
Location: Shared house
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Amber Urges Jonty to Leave — Amber tries to persuade Jonty to leave, but fame and the story's momentum draw the group back. Characters: Amber, Jonty
Location: Unspecified
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Becky Blames Dawn — Becky claims Dawn feeds on energy, controls people through pain, and ordered an attack on Zauna. Characters: Becky Dubar, Dawn, Zauna
Location: Unspecified
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Becky Urges Them to Move — Becky urges the group to move out, but the story's reach and Jonty's online commitments complicate escape. Characters: Becky Dubar, Jonty, Zauna, Pete, Amber
Location: Shared house
An Unanswered Contact
Becky attributes the danger and an attack on Zauna to Dawn, and urges the group to move out. Amber decides to leave, while the others eventually attempt to contact Dawn; the reply and ensuing fear leave the haunting unresolved.
Key Events
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Amber Chooses to Leave — Amber decides to leave, hoping she and Jonty can choose their relationship over the spectacle. Characters: Amber, Jonty
Location: Unspecified
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Gathering to Contact Dawn — The group gathers and attempts to communicate with Dawn. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Becky Dubar, Pete, Amber, Ilana Clark
Location: Unspecified gathering place
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They Ask If They Are Safe — The group asks Dawn whether she forgives them and whether they are safe. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Becky Dubar, Pete, Amber, Ilana Clark
Location: Unspecified gathering place
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Reply Signals Danger — A reply suggests they are not safe, and one person begins to feel strange. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Becky Dubar, Pete, Amber, Ilana Clark
Location: Unspecified gathering place
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Gathering Erupts in Fear — The scene erupts in fear, leaving the haunting and erased footage unresolved. Characters: Jonty, Zauna, Becky Dubar, Pete, Amber, Ilana Clark
Location: Unspecified gathering place