Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
From Commercials To Comeback
Val loses a deodorant commercial assignment and searches for a serious movie project. An unexpected blockbuster offer gives him a possible return to prestige filmmaking.
Key Events
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Frozen Commercial Assignment — Val directs a deodorant commercial in the frozen north of Canada. Characters: Val
Location: Frozen northern Canada
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Val Loses The Job — Val is thrown off his latest commercial effort and seeks a real movie project. Characters: Val
Location: Frozen northern Canada
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Unexpected Movie Offer — Ellie and Hal offer Val a big-budget blockbuster set in New York City. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: New York City film industry
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Old Rivalry Resurfaces — Val confronts the fact that Hal, Ellie's boyfriend, replaced him years earlier. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: Production meeting
The Offer From The Past
The offer comes from Ellie, Val's former wife, and Hal, the studio head who replaced him in Ellie's life. Val accepts despite the personal complications.
Key Events
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Val Accepts Reluctantly — Encouraged by his agent, Val reluctantly agrees to direct the project. Characters: Val
Location: Film production office
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Psychosomatic Blindness Begins — A psychosomatic ailment makes Val blind just before production begins. Characters: Val
Location: Film production setting
Directing Without Sight
Just before production, Val becomes psychosomatically blind. He hides the condition while attempting to direct the movie without the cast, crew, or Hal discovering it.
Key Events
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Blindness Is Concealed — Val decides to hide his blindness from the cast, crew, and Hal. Characters: Val
Location: Film production office
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Production Starts — The New York movie begins production while Val secretly directs without sight. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: New York City film set
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Secret Direction Continues — Val continues directing while concealing his condition during production. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: New York City film set
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Val And Ellie Reconnect — Working together allows Val and Ellie to rekindle their relationship. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: New York City film set
Love Rewritten On Set
During filming, Val rekindles his relationship with Ellie, while Lori leaves him. Val also recovers something emotionally important that had been absent from his life.
Key Events
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Lori Leaves Val — Val's younger girlfriend Lori leaves him during his renewed closeness with Ellie. Characters: Val, Lori
Location: New York City
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Personal Reconnection — Val reconnects with what had been missing from his life. Characters: Val
Location: New York City
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Sight Returns — Val regains his sight after recovering an important part of his life. Characters: Val
Location: New York City
A Disaster Finds France
Val regains his sight and discovers that the movie is a disaster. Although it flops, it becomes a hit in France, leading to a new directing invitation and Val's reunion with Ellie.
Key Events
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The Finished Film Revealed — After recovering his sight, Val realizes the movie he directed is a disaster. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: Film production setting
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Movie Opens Poorly — The completed blockbuster is released and fails in its initial market. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: Movie release setting
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Domestic Flop Confirmed — The movie is confirmed to be a commercial flop. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: Film industry setting
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French Success Emerges — Despite failing elsewhere, the movie becomes a hit in France. Characters: Val
Location: France
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French Directing Invitation — French success leads to an invitation for Val to direct another film. Characters: Val
Location: France
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Val Wins Ellie Back — Val and Ellie reunite after the professional and personal upheavals. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: France
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Thank God For France — Val happily credits France for giving him a new filmmaking opportunity. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: France