Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Risky Directing Opportunity
Film-industry figures question whether Val can handle a new picture. Ellie supports him, and he receives the opportunity despite concerns about his past productions.
Key Events
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Hollywood Dream Song — A song celebrates the dream of going to Hollywood.
Location: Unspecified
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Debating Val's Appointment — Film-industry figures debate whether Val should direct a new picture. Characters: Val
Location: Unspecified
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Val's Troubled Reputation — Concerns arise that Val may exceed the budget or fail to finish. Characters: Val
Location: Unspecified
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Ellie Supports Val — Ellie argues that Val is right for the film's material. Characters: Ellie, Val
Location: Unspecified
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Val Gets the Film — Val is given the opportunity to direct the picture. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: Unspecified
Old Marriage, New Strain
Val and Ellie attempt to deal professionally with the film assignment, but their unresolved marriage resurfaces in an argument. Their personal history complicates the work.
Key Events
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Professionalism and Resentment — Val confronts Ellie about leaving him, and they argue about their marriage and feelings. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: Unspecified
Directing Without Sight
Val suddenly loses his sight and fears a serious medical cause. He nevertheless keeps working, relying on verbal instructions and counting his steps around the set.
Key Events
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Val Loses His Sight — Val suddenly becomes unable to see while preparing to direct. Characters: Val
Location: Unspecified
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Fear of a Brain Tumor — Alarmed by his blindness, Val fears that he may have a brain tumor. Characters: Val
Location: Unspecified
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Blindness on Set — Val continues directing by relying on verbal instructions and guidance around the set. Characters: Val
Location: Film set
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Counting Steps — Val counts paces to find chairs and desks while navigating the set. Characters: Val
Location: Film set
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Val Calls Cut — Despite being unable to see, Val directs a scene and calls "Cut." Characters: Val
Location: Film set
Feelings Resurface
Val's jealousy over Hal and Ellie's questions about their past bring their unresolved feelings into focus. They reveal that they have quietly reunited while production continues.
Key Events
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Jealousy Over Hal — Val remains jealous and hurt about Ellie's relationship with Hal. Characters: Val, Ellie, Al
Location: Unspecified
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The Engagement Ring — Ellie asks why Val has been avoiding her and questions him about her engagement ring. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: Unspecified
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Quietly Back Together — Val and Ellie reveal that they have resumed their relationship and initially want privacy. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: Film set
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Production Continues — Val continues navigating the set by counting steps as the shoot and renewed relationship continue. Characters: Val, Ellie
Location: Film set