Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Family He Lost
Hector's first incarnation ends when raiders take his family after his hesitation. His wife's warning becomes a lasting emotional burden.
Key Events
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Family Taken by Raiders — Raiders take Hector's family after his cowardice and hesitation. Characters: Hector, Raider
Location: Prehistoric setting
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A Wife's Warning — Before being taken, Hector's wife shouts, "Don't lose the children!" Characters: Hector
Location: Prehistoric setting
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The First Life Ends — Hector's unresolved loss carries into the next incarnation. Characters: Hector
Location: Prehistoric setting
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Roman Slavery — Hector becomes a slave to a foolish master. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Ancient Rome
Chains and Forgetfulness
As a Roman slave, Hector serves a desperate master and is ordered to die with him. Hector wants freedom but becomes distracted by new love.
Key Events
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Roman Slavery — Hector becomes a slave to a foolish master. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Ancient Rome
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Master Loses Fortune — Hector's master loses his fortune and faces pressure from creditors. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Ancient Rome
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Forced Suicide Order — The master kills himself and orders Hector to join him. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Ancient Rome
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Love Distracts Hector — Hector falls in love with another slave and forgets his waiting family. Characters: Hector
Location: Ancient Rome
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Freedom and Memory — Hector longs for freedom so he can find his lost wife and children. Characters: Hector
Location: Ancient Rome
Duties Across Scotland
Hector returns as a Scottish crusader traveling toward his children. He encounters his soul mate and must choose between competing forms of family duty.
Key Events
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Freedom and Memory — Hector longs for freedom so he can find his lost wife and children. Characters: Hector
Location: Ancient Rome
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Scottish Crusader — Hector becomes a Scottish crusader traveling home toward his children. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Scotland
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A Former Master Returns — The soul of Hector's Roman master now travels as a crusader. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Scotland
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A Priest's Dilemma — The crusader struggles to decide whether to become a priest. Characters: Hector, Priest
Location: Scotland
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The Soul Mate Found — Hector finds his soul mate from the Roman incarnation. Characters: Hector
Location: Scotland
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Duties Pull Apart — The widow asks Hector to join her family, but he feels bound to his Scottish children. Characters: Hector
Location: Scotland
The Shipwrecked Master
In Renaissance Portugal and Africa, Hector's social position reverses as he becomes a master. Familiar relationships return in altered forms and expose his indecision.
Key Events
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Renaissance Shipwreck — Hector becomes a Portuguese man shipwrecked on the African coast. Characters: Hector, Raider
Location: African coast
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Roles Are Reversed — Hector is the master in this life, reversing his Roman status. Characters: Hector, Raider
Location: African coast
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Past Relationships Return — His former wife appears as a spurned lover, accompanied by the former raider as her steadfast friend. Characters: Hector, Raider
Location: African coast
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Cowardice Reconsidered — Hector is forced to confront his capacity for cowardly indecision. Characters: Hector, Raider
Location: African coast
Strength in New York
Modern Hector faces the consequences of cowardly indecision. Recurring companions support him as he finally addresses the children lost across lifetimes.
Key Events
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Modern New York — Hector becomes a modern man living with the consequences of past indecision. Characters: Hector, Priest, Raider
Location: New York
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Returning Companions Support Him — Former master, friend, soul mate, and the husband linked to the raider support Hector. Characters: Hector, Priest, Raider
Location: New York
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Facing the Lost Children — Hector gains the strength to address the children he lost lifetimes ago. Characters: Hector, Priest, Raider
Location: New York