Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Burned Lab and Borrowed Ambition
Tony's overloaded experiment destroys his laboratory, leading him to seek help from Scott. Scott's resentment over Carson's credit-taking and Linda's feelings for Tony intensifies his personal grievances.
Key Events
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Amplifier Overload — Tony ignores an overload, and an electrical fire destroys his laboratory. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Tony's laboratory
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Tony Seeks Scott — Unemployed after the fire, Tony asks his brother Scott to help with the experiment. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson, Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Scott's workplace
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Scott's Cargonite Work — Scott drives the development of dense Cargonite while Carson takes much of the credit. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Theodore W. Carson
Location: Fairview Research Center
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Linda Favors Tony — Linda falls for Tony, and Scott reacts furiously. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Tony Nelson, Linda Davis
Location: Fairview Research Center
The Power Takes Hold
Scott takes Tony's experiment and discovers that he can pass through steel even without the amplifier powered. Tony warns him to hide the ability, but Scott begins testing it in public.
Key Events
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Scott Takes the Experiment — Scott steals Tony's experiment and begins experimenting with it. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Laboratory
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Hand Passes Through Steel — Scott passes his hand through steel even though the amplifier power is off. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Laboratory
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Tony Warns Scott — Tony marvels at Scott's ability but warns him to hide it until side effects are tested. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson, Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Laboratory
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Lead and Gold Insight — Tony recalls that lead and gold merge only through an extremely slow process. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Laboratory
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Fruit Through Glass — Scott tests his ability by shoplifting fruit through a solid window. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Grocery store
The Cost of Passing Through
Scott learns that the transformation rapidly ages him and that contact with another person can restore his youth by draining their lifeforce. Schwartz's sudden death marks the lethal consequences of the power.
Key Events
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Scott Rejects Necklace Theft — Scott notices a diamond necklace behind the window but decides not to steal it. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Jewelry store
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Aging Revealed — Scott discovers that using the ability greatly accelerates his aging. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Unspecified
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Schwartz Dies — During an examination, Brian Schwartz suddenly drops dead. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Brian Schwartz
Location: Company doctor's office
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Lifeforce Draining Discovered — Scott realizes that passing through another person rejuvenates him by draining their lifeforce. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Unspecified
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Unexplained Bank Robbery — News reports a $50,000 robbery with no forced entry or video footage. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Bank
Power Becomes Predation
Reports of an impossible bank robbery and money embedded in steel alert Tony to the abuse of Scott's ability. Scott kills Carson and uses the power to pursue money, status, and attention, while his victims reveal its cost.
Key Events
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Bill Embedded in Steel — Reports describe a $1,000 bill protruding from solid tempered steel. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Unspecified
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Tony Alerts Police — Tony recognizes Scott's misuse of the power and tries to convince the police. Characters: Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Police station
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Carson Drained — Scott confronts Carson, reveals his experiment's results, and drains Carson's lifeforce. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Theodore W. Carson
Location: Fairview Research Center
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Bar Girl Ages — After Scott kisses a bar girl, she sees that she has aged and flees in horror. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson
Location: Bar
The Cargonite Test
Scott kills a rival scientist and returns to youthful form. Linda's attempt to reach him ends with her shooting him while he is solid, but Scott defiantly tries to pass through the Cargonite-embedded wall.
Key Events
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Rival Scientist Killed — Scott kills a rival scientist who tried to steal Tony's work, then regains his youthful form. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Laboratory
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Linda Shoots Scott — Linda begs Scott to stop, tests that he is solid with a kiss, and shoots him. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Linda Davis, Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Laboratory
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Cargonite Wall Crossing — Bleeding, Scott claims invincibility and struggles through a wall embedded with Cargonite. Characters: Dr. Scott Nelson, Linda Davis, Dr. Tony Nelson
Location: Laboratory