Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Isolation in Devon
Tom struggles with the family's move to rural Devon while Mum's pregnancy advances. The household maintains a fragile routine until a car crash forces an emergency hospital visit and the birth of Baby Alice.
Key Events
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Family Relocation to Devon — Tom feels isolated after his family moves from London to a rural Devon house. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad, Mum
Location: Rural House
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Car Crash and Emergency Birth — Family crashes en route to hospital; baby Alice is born while Mum is trapped. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad, Mum, Baby Alice
Location: Car and Hospital
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Pregnancy Support — Family members assist Mum during her late pregnancy, establishing domestic routine. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Mum
Location: Family Home
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Shopping Conversation — Tom complains about not knowing anyone; Mum reassures him he will make friends. Characters: Tom, Mum
Location: Local Shop
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Hospital Stitching — Family gets stitched up after the crash and visits Mum and the newborn baby. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad, Mum
Location: Hospital
Shattered Innocence
Tom discovers his father and sister in an inappropriate situation, leading to a tense pub outing and a beach night. The family's hidden dysfunction begins to surface as parental authority cracks.
Key Events
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Bathtub Discovery — Tom witnesses Dad and Jessie naked together in the bathtub through the back door. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad
Location: Family Home
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Pub Introduction to Nick — Jessie introduces Tom to her boyfriend Nick during a family outing. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Nick
Location: Pub
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Beach Night Out — Jessie and Nick leave Tom alone by a fire after an awkward conversation. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Nick
Location: Beach
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Parental Confrontation — Parents punish them for staying out; Mum restrains Dad from harming Jessie. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad, Mum
Location: Family Home
Descent into Darkness
Tom follows his parents to a bunker and captures evidence of abuse, destroying the camera in despair. Jessie attempts to soothe his guilt through self-harm, while a London trip provides temporary distraction.
Key Events
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Bunker Surveillance — Tom follows them and films Dad abusing Jessie against her will through a wall hole. Characters: Tom, Dad, Jessie
Location: Old War Bunker
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Camera Destruction — Devastated by the footage, Tom throws his camera into the sea. Characters: Tom
Location: Sea
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Self-Harm Gesture — Jessie burns her breast with a lighter to appease Tom's anger and guilt. Characters: Tom, Jessie
Location: Family Home
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London Trip — Jessie takes Tom to London to visit her friend Carol for a change of scenery. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Carol
Location: London
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Carol's Seduction Attempt — Carol tries to seduce Tom at Jessie's request but stops when she walks in on them. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Carol
Location: Carol's Home
Fractured Family
A hospital emergency reveals blood in the baby's nappy, prompting Tom to warn Mum. Dad retaliates with physical violence and gaslighting, culminating in Tom stabbing him and fleeing to the bunker with Jessie.
Key Events
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Hospital Emergency — Mum wakes Tom for a baby emergency; Jessie drives Tom home afterward. Characters: Tom, Mum, Jessie, Baby Alice
Location: Hospital
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Lucy's Appearance — Lucy arrives to offer Jessie comfort, hinting at hidden knowledge about the family. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Lucy
Location: Family Home
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Baby's Blood Discovery — Tom sees blood in baby Alice's nappy and warns Mum never to let Dad near her. Characters: Tom, Mum, Baby Alice
Location: Hospital
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Dad's Physical Attack — Dad physically assaults Tom, accusing him of breaking up the family and threatening care. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad
Location: Family Home
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Gaslighting Confrontation — Dad denies abuse and gaslights Tom; Jessie supports Tom but is distressed by the lies. Characters: Tom, Jessie, Dad
Location: Dad's Room
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The Stabbing — Tom stabs Dad in the stomach to stop his blustering and denial. Characters: Tom, Dad
Location: Family Home
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Bunker Retreat — Tom and Jessie flee to the bunker; Jessie comforts him silently as he processes the violence. Characters: Tom, Jessie
Location: Old War Bunker
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Final Silence — Tom closes the bunker door, sealing their fate together in isolation. Characters: Tom, Jessie
Location: Old War Bunker
An alienated teenager, saddened that he has moved away from London, must find a way to deal with a dark family secret.