Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Tyrant And A Replacement
General Bosavi rules Tengara while the CIA searches for a more acceptable successor in Akhantar. Sam French and Jake Wyer are introduced as pragmatic mercenaries with little loyalty to either side.
Key Events
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Bosavi Rules Tengara — General Bosavi rules the island country of Tengara as a maniacal tyrant. Characters: General Bosavi
Location: Tengara
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CIA Opposes Bosavi — The CIA turns against Bosavi's leadership. Characters: General Bosavi
Location: Tengara
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Akhantar Chosen — The CIA favors Akhantar as a more acceptable replacement for Bosavi. Characters: Akhantar, General Bosavi
Location: Tengara
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Mercenaries Consider Profit — The American mercenaries care more about payment than either side's allegiance. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Tengara
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Former Colleagues Reunited — Bickering former colleagues Sam and Jake are brought back together. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Tengara
The Reluctant Army
The bickering former colleagues are reunited under duress and ordered to raise a ramshackle army. Suleta's presence in the opposition makes their reluctant assignment more personally compelling.
Key Events
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Forced Recruitment — Sam and Jake are placed under duress and assigned to the operation. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Martin Sprue
Location: Tengara
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Army-Building Mission — The mercenaries are tasked with raising a ramshackle army for Akhantar's opposition. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Akhantar
Location: Tengara
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Suleta Joins Opposition — Suleta appears among the opposition and brings charisma to the movement. Characters: Suleta, Akhantar, Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Opposition ranks
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Reluctance Softens — Suleta's presence somewhat mollifies the men's initial reluctance. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Suleta
Location: Opposition ranks
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Insurrection Discovered — Bosavi learns that an insurrection is being prepared against his regime. Characters: General Bosavi, Akhantar, Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Tengara
The Betrayal From Above
Bosavi discovers the impending insurrection and negotiates with American authorities to preserve his leadership. The CIA then abandons the freedom fighters, leaving the opposition exposed.
Key Events
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Bosavi Negotiates — Bosavi negotiates with American authorities to salvage his leadership. Characters: General Bosavi
Location: Tengara
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CIA Abandons Opposition — The CIA turns its back on the freedom fighters after negotiating with Bosavi. Characters: Martin Sprue, Akhantar, Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Opposition ranks
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Rebels Face Repression — The opposition must prepare for the regime's merciless repression. Characters: General Bosavi, Akhantar, Suleta, Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Tengara
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Martin Questions Loyalty — Martin's moral conflict becomes central as the operation's support collapses. Characters: Martin Sprue, Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Tengara
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Abandonment Considered — The three men consider whether to abandon the exposed rebels. Characters: Martin Sprue, Sam French, Jake Wyer
Location: Opposition ranks
A Cause Worth Defending
Martin Sprue, Sam, and Jake confront the choice of abandoning the rebels or remaining involved. Their venal motives are challenged as they begin to identify with the cause.
Key Events
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Mercenary Motives Tested — The worsening crisis challenges Sam and Jake's profit-driven detachment. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Suleta, Akhantar
Location: Opposition ranks
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Cause Gains Meaning — The men begin to recognize that the rebel cause matters to them. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Martin Sprue, Suleta
Location: Opposition ranks
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Champions Of The Cause — They move toward becoming champions of a cause they initially ignored. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Martin Sprue, Akhantar, Suleta
Location: Opposition ranks
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Bosavi's Regime Presses On — Bosavi's preserved leadership leaves the opposition facing continued danger. Characters: General Bosavi, Sam French, Jake Wyer, Martin Sprue
Location: Tengara
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Commitment To Rebels — The central choice resolves around defending the rebels despite political abandonment. Characters: Sam French, Jake Wyer, Martin Sprue, Suleta, Akhantar, General Bosavi
Location: Tengara