Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
An Unsettling Arrival
A frightened woman seeks help, but the encounter turns violent amid a baby's cries. The story then shifts to Alex and Penny as new parents.
Key Events
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A Frightened Woman Seeks Help — A frightened woman pounds on a door and is brought inside for help.
Location: A doorway and interior
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The Opening Turns Violent — An attempt to get medical assistance turns violent amid a baby's cries.
Location: Inside the house
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New Parents in the Country — The story shifts to Alex and Penny's life as new parents in an isolated home. Characters: Alex, Penny, Tanner
Location: Their country house
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A Move for Family and Music — They have left the city for a home with room for their child and Alex's music. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house
Country Life Under Strain
Alex and Penny settle into an isolated country house, though their hopes for family life and music are tempered by doubts. Baby care, repairs, noise, and lost sleep bring mounting tension.
Key Events
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Alex Questions the Move — Penny is excited about the house while Alex doubts the move and worries about supporting them. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house
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Parenthood Exhausts the Couple — Frequent crying, house repairs, construction noise, and sleepless nights strain the family. Characters: Alex, Penny, Tanner
Location: Their country house
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Arguments over Household Strain — The couple argue over household tasks and the choices that brought them there. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house
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Penny Sees a Woman in a Mirror — Penny says she saw a woman pass through a mirror. Characters: Penny
Location: Their country house
Penny's Growing Fear
Penny reports seeing a woman pass through a mirror and later has disturbing dreams. Alex attributes the experiences to exhaustion, while a message from Michael emphasizes Alex's isolation and stalled music.
Key Events
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Disturbing Dreams — Penny experiences disturbing dreams as her fear about the house grows. Characters: Penny
Location: Their country house
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Alex Blames Exhaustion — Alex reassures Penny and attributes their experiences to exhaustion and parenting stress. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house
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Michael Sends a Message — Michael expresses a wish to visit with Johanna, highlighting Alex's isolation. Characters: Alex, Michael, Johanna
Location: Their country house
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Alex Has Written Little Music — The plot notes that Alex has managed to write little music since the move. Characters: Alex
Location: Their country house
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Brief Relief from Baby Care — Help with the baby gives Alex and Penny a brief chance to rest. Characters: Alex, Penny, Tanner
Location: Their country house
A Fragile Respite
Help with the baby briefly lets Alex and Penny rest, but the calm does not last. Penny becomes convinced that Tanner may be in danger.
Key Events
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Penny Fears for Tanner — Penny becomes convinced something is wrong and fears for the baby's safety. Characters: Penny, Tanner
Location: Their country house
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Dispute over Sleep Medication — Alex says Penny's perceptions are not real and urges her to take pills to sleep. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house
The Missing Baby
Alex dismisses Penny's perceptions and urges her to take pills, and their disagreement becomes frightening. After Alex is found disoriented, Penny reports that Tanner is missing as a flash-flood warning sounds; the excerpt leaves the cause and outcome unresolved.
Key Events
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The Couple's Frightening Confrontation — Their disagreement escalates into a frightening confrontation. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house
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Alex Speaks of Noodle — Alex is found disoriented and speaks as if Noodle is present. Characters: Alex
Location: Their country house
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Penny Reports Tanner Missing — Penny wakes Alex in panic, says Tanner is missing, and asks for help. Characters: Alex, Penny, Tanner
Location: Their country house
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Flash-Flood Warning — A flash-flood warning is broadcast as the excerpt ends without resolving Tanner's disappearance. Characters: Alex, Penny
Location: Their country house