Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Disastrous Investigation
Kinnear and Paddock mishandle a magistrate's death and are demoted after firing on the corpse. Their visit to the widow's house creates another damaging mistake.
Key Events
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Magistrate Dies In Car — A magistrate dies in an exhaust-filled car and releases the handbrake during his final moments.
Location: Road near a shopping centre
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Car Rolls Into Centre — The unmanned car rolls into a busy shopping centre.
Location: Busy shopping centre
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Detectives Fire On Corpse — Kinnear and Paddock empty their firearms into the dead magistrate's body. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock
Location: Busy shopping centre
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ZTU Demotion — The disgraced detectives are demoted from the Zero Tolerance Unit to uniform duties. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock
Location: Police department
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Widow's House Burns — A visit to the magistrate's widow ends with the accidental destruction of her house by fire. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock
Location: The magistrate's widow's house
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Journalist Arrested — Bale is arrested for allegedly blackmailing the magistrate. Characters: Julie Bale
Location: Police custody
The Missing Evidence
Bale is arrested while Kinnear grows suspicious of a tampered computer disc. Violence against the officers handling the case suggests that the investigation reaches into the police force.
Key Events
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Journalist Arrested — Bale is arrested for allegedly blackmailing the magistrate. Characters: Julie Bale
Location: Police custody
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Tampered Disc Found — Kinnear discovers that a computer disc from the car was tampered with by unknown persons. Characters: Ben Kinnear
Location: Magistrate's car
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Case Officers Questioned — The handling of the original disc is questioned during the magistrate case review. Characters: Ben Kinnear
Location: Police department
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Evidence Witnesses Murdered — One case officer kills two colleagues and stages the scene to suggest a different shooter fired first.
Location: Police department
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Detectives Suspended — The returned ZTU chief suspends Kinnear and Paddock from duty. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Ted Pratt
Location: Police department
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Database Break-In — With Northey's help, the detectives enter the database unit and copy the original file. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Northey
Location: Police database unit
The Corruption Trap
Suspended and framed by an altered file, Kinnear and Paddock rely on Northey to obtain evidence. The corruption ring escalates from manipulation to bombing and capture.
Key Events
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Database Break-In — With Northey's help, the detectives enter the database unit and copy the original file. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Northey
Location: Police database unit
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File Is Altered — Pratt and the corrupt officer confront them, and the file now implicates Kinnear in corruption. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Northey, Ted Pratt
Location: Police database unit
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House Bombed — Explosives planted by the corrupt officer destroy Paddock's house in an assassination attempt. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock
Location: Paddock's house
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Detectives Captured — Kinnear and Paddock are captured by corrupt officers and brought before Pratt. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Ted Pratt
Location: Unknown holding location
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Corruption Ringleader Revealed — Pratt is revealed as the corruption ringleader, while Bale is confirmed to be an innocent scapegoat. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Ted Pratt, Julie Bale
Location: Unknown holding location
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Northey Rescues Detectives — Northey rescues Kinnear and Paddock from the corruption operation. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Northey
Location: Holding location
The Political Exposure
After Northey's rescue, the detectives record a conversation implicating the premier. They seize him and arrange an exchange for the abducted Bale.
Key Events
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Northey Rescues Detectives — Northey rescues Kinnear and Paddock from the corruption operation. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Northey
Location: Holding location
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Political Evidence Discovered — Kinnear overhears a call revealing the premier's involvement and records the conversation. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Northey
Location: Premier's office
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Premier Taken Hostage — The detectives kidnap the premier and offer him in exchange for Bale. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock
Location: Deserted road outside Melbourne
The Roadside Reckoning
Bale and the detectives reverse the planned execution during a tense standoff. Pratt's organization collapses, the conspirators are arrested, and the detectives regain their careers.
Key Events
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Final Road Standoff — Bale seizes a concealed gun while Paddock aims an assault rifle at Pratt and the armed officers. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Julie Bale, Northey, Ted Pratt
Location: Deserted road outside Melbourne
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Corruption Ring Arrested — Pratt, his cronies, and the premier surrender and are arrested for corruption. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock, Julie Bale, Northey, Ted Pratt
Location: Deserted road outside Melbourne
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Detectives Reinstated — Kinnear and Paddock are reinstated and promoted after exposing the corruption. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Mike Paddock
Location: Police department
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Romance Reignited — Kinnear's old romance with Bale is re-ignited after the conspiracy collapses. Characters: Ben Kinnear, Julie Bale
Location: Police department