Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Debt And Desperation
An out-of-work actor faces a $900 debt to a local bookie. The threat of broken bones creates the pressure behind his desperate plan.
Key Events
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Christmas Setting — The story begins during the Christmas season.
Location: Local community
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Actor Without Work — An out-of-work actor is generally disliked by people around him.
Location: Local community
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Nine Hundred Dollar Debt — The actor owes a local bookie nine hundred dollars.
Location: Local betting context
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Bone Breaking Threat — The bookie threatens physical violence unless the debt is paid.
Location: Local betting context
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Search For Sympathy — The actor realizes that his real financial problem will not gain much sympathy.
Location: Private conversation
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False Emergency Story — He tells his girlfriend that money is needed for his sister's emergency abortion.
Location: Private conversation
The Invented Emergency
The actor tells his girlfriend that money is needed for his sister's emergency abortion. This false explanation becomes the basis for a wider money search.
Key Events
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False Emergency Story — He tells his girlfriend that money is needed for his sister's emergency abortion.
Location: Private conversation
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Money Request Begins — The invented emergency becomes a reason to seek money from others.
Location: Local community
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Bartender Joins Search — A bartender starts asking people for money connected to the supposed emergency.
Location: Bar
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Customer Offers Help — A friendly bar customer becomes involved in seeking the requested money.
Location: Bar
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Requests Spread — The bartender and customer hit up more people for the cash.
Location: Bar
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Christmas Parties Connect — People move among Christmas parties while the story circulates.
Location: Christmas parties
Rumor Across Christmas
A bartender and a friendly customer ask others for cash. As people move among Christmas parties, the emergency story spreads through the community.
Key Events
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Christmas Parties Connect — People move among Christmas parties while the story circulates.
Location: Christmas parties
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Rumor Travels — The emergency story is passed from person to person.
Location: Christmas parties
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Community Mobilizes — The spreading story prompts continued efforts to gather money.
Location: Local community
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The Lie Gains Momentum — The actor's lie expands beyond the original conversation.
Location: Local community
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People Continue Roaming — People continue moving between gatherings and spreading the word.
Location: Christmas parties
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Return Toward The Bar — The scattered participants begin converging again at the bar.
Location: Local community
The Barroom Exposure
The scattered participants return to the bar after carrying the story from place to place. Their gathering finally exposes the actor's ploy.
Key Events
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Return Toward The Bar — The scattered participants begin converging again at the bar.
Location: Local community
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Gathering At The Bar — The people involved in the money search meet back at the bar.
Location: Bar
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Story Compared — The gathered participants have an opportunity to compare the story they were told.
Location: Bar
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Ploy Revealed — Only at the final gathering is the actor's money-seeking ploy exposed.
Location: Bar
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Deception Exposed — The story ends with the deception revealed to the assembled group.
Location: Bar