Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Warning At The Pier
A teenager joins his police officer father on patrol and witnesses a confrontation at a pier. A criminal warns that someone wants his father dead.
Key Events
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Patrol With His Father — A teenager accompanies his police officer father on patrol despite objections from his father's partner.
Location: City patrol
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Dream Of Police Service — The father hopes his son will eventually join the police force.
Location: City patrol
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Pier Altercation — The officer confronts criminals loitering on a pier.
Location: Pier
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Warning Of A Killing — A criminal warns that someone on the street wants the officer dead.
Location: Pier
The Family Is Targeted
Contract killers invade the family house and kill the teenager's parents. The surviving son is forced to confront the attackers but cannot fire the offered gun.
Key Events
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Attack On The Family — Contract killers enter the house intending to murder the entire family.
Location: Family house
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Parents Are Killed — The teenager's parents are killed during the home invasion.
Location: Family house
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Gun In The Bathroom — The killers' leader taunts the teenager and hands him a gun.
Location: Bathroom
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Failed Act Of Revenge — The teenager cannot pull the trigger, and the gunman shoots him.
Location: Bathroom
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Left For Dead — The wounded teenager is abandoned after the attack but survives.
Location: Family house
Survival And Duty
The wounded survivor is nursed back to health with support from his grandmother and Melissa. Fifteen years later, he enters the police force to honor his father.
Key Events
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Recovery With Support — His grandmother and Melissa help nurse him back to health. Characters: Melissa
Location: Grandmother's home
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Fifteen Years Later — Fifteen years later, the survivor has joined the police to honor his father.
Location: Police precinct
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Haunted By The Past — Memories of his parents' violent deaths continue to haunt the police officer.
Location: Police precinct
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Excessive Force Pattern — Superiors criticize him for excessive force after nine suspects die during his work.
Location: City streets
A Broken Officer
Haunted by the past, the officer repeatedly uses excessive force and becomes estranged from Melissa. A violent act against an incapacitated suspect deepens his crisis.
Key Events
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Excessive Force Pattern — Superiors criticize him for excessive force after nine suspects die during his work.
Location: City streets
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Estrangement From Melissa — His obsession with police work leaves him estranged from Melissa, with whom he has a son. Characters: Melissa
Location: Domestic setting
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Misconduct At The Station — He beats an incapacitated child molester, triggering another disciplinary crisis.
Location: City streets
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Drinking At A Bar — After the misconduct incident, he drinks alone to cope with his problems.
Location: Bar
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Patron Takes Him Home — A female patron picks him up at the bar and takes him home.
Location: Bar and home
Justice Incorporated
Molls engineers a meeting and introduces a secret fellowship that uses extrajudicial methods. Rachel Gill's role and the promise of revenge draw the officer into the organization.
Key Events
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Seduction Is A Setup — The apparent seduction is revealed as a scheme arranged by fellow officer Molls. Characters: Molls
Location: Private home
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Justice Incorporated Revealed — Molls introduces a secret police fellowship using extrajudicial methods against crime. Characters: Molls
Location: Private home
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Rachel Gill Introduced — Rachel Gill is presented as Molls's right-hand woman and top executioner. Characters: Molls, Rachel Gill
Location: Justice Incorporated headquarters
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Revenge Is Offered — The fellowship appeals to his desire for revenge against the criminal underworld. Characters: Molls, Rachel Gill
Location: Justice Incorporated headquarters
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Joining The Fellowship — He joins Justice Incorporated, enticed by revenge and Rachel Gill's presence. Characters: Molls, Rachel Gill
Location: Justice Incorporated headquarters