Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Sabotage on the Night Train
A freight train carrying naval mines travels toward Portsmouth. A man escapes from the train, leaving behind a bag that exposes a sabotage threat.
Key Events
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Mine Train Leaves for Portsmouth — A freight train carrying naval mines heads toward HM Dockyard.
Location: England railway line
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Saboteur Jumps from Train — A man jumps from the moving train during the night. Characters: Saboteur
Location: Birmingham railyard
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Abandoned Sabotage Bag — The abandoned bag reveals evidence of a sabotage plot. Characters: Saboteur
Location: Birmingham railyard
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Bomb Threat Is Identified — Authorities infer that a timed bomb threatens the mine shipment.
Location: Birmingham railway security office
The Threat Reaches Portsmouth
Authorities assume the train has been rigged to explode after reaching the naval dockyard. The train is diverted and the nearby neighborhood is evacuated.
Key Events
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Search Moves to Portsmouth — The search focuses on finding the saboteur near the expected aftermath.
Location: Portsmouth
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Train Diverted to Siding — Railway authorities divert the train away from populated areas. Characters: Jim Warrilow
Location: Abandoned railway siding
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Neighborhood Evacuated — The surrounding neighborhood is evacuated because of the bomb threat. Characters: Jim Warrilow
Location: Area around abandoned siding
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Peter Is Recruited — Jim brings Peter, a former army man, to the endangered train. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Birmingham
The Mine-by-Mine Search
Jim brings Peter to the isolated train for expert assistance. Peter determines that the bomb is hidden inside one of the mines and begins a painstaking search.
Key Events
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Peter Inspects the Train — Peter conducts an initial inspection with Jim's assistance. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Abandoned railway siding
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Bomb Hidden Inside a Mine — Peter concludes that the bomb is concealed inside one of the mines. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Freight train
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Mine-by-Mine Search Begins — Peter opens each mine while Jim assists with the examination. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Freight train
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First Bomb Found — The search locates the bomb hidden inside a mine. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Freight train
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First Bomb Disabled — Peter disables the first bomb shortly after dawn. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Freight train
The Captive's Warning
The first bomb is disabled, but the captured saboteur is brought back for questioning. His warning reveals that two more delays may detonate within minutes.
Key Events
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First Bomb Disabled — Peter disables the first bomb shortly after dawn. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Freight train
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Saboteur Captured in Portsmouth — The saboteur is captured and transported by helicopter. Characters: Saboteur
Location: Portsmouth
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Captive Brought to Train — The captured saboteur is brought to the train for questioning. Characters: Jim Warrilow, Saboteur
Location: Abandoned railway siding
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Saboteur Refuses Questions — The saboteur remains uncooperative when Jim attempts to question him. Characters: Jim Warrilow, Saboteur
Location: Abandoned railway siding
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Two Delays Are Revealed — The saboteur warns that two delays are set to go off within minutes. Characters: Jim Warrilow, Saboteur
Location: Freight train
The Field Explosion
Peter searches for the second bomb while the remaining time disappears. He throws it into a field, where it explodes harmlessly, ending the emergency and allowing reconciliation.
Key Events
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Peter Searches for Second Bomb — Peter urgently probes the train for the second bomb. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Freight train
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Second Bomb Is Thrown Away — With no time to disarm it, Peter throws the second bomb into a field. Characters: Peter Lyncort
Location: Field beside the railway siding
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Second Explosion Harms No One — The bomb explodes harmlessly in the field. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow
Location: Field beside the railway siding
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Emergency Ends — The immediate danger ends after the bomb threat is neutralized. Characters: Peter Lyncort, Jim Warrilow, Saboteur
Location: Abandoned railway siding
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Peter Reconciles with His Wife — Peter and his wife are reconciled after the emergency. Characters: Peter Lyncort
Location: Birmingham