Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Waiting Under Pressure
Becca waits for Lance while his military absences strain their relationship. A mortgage deadline threatens the farm, and Lance describes his army work as supply delivery.
Key Events
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Forgotten Supply Depot — A soldier recalls isolated troops passing the time at a forgotten supply depot.
Location: 47th Battalion supply depot
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Becca Waits for Lance — Becca anxiously waits for Lance, whose military service has kept them apart. Characters: Becca, Lance
Location: Farm
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Service Strains Their Bond — Lance's absences leave Becca afraid he may never return. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Farm
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Mortgage Warning — A bank representative warns that the mortgage must be paid within 60 days or the farm may be sold. Characters: Becca
Location: Farm
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Lance Defends His Service — Lance says his army work matters, describing it as delivering supplies. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Farm
A Troubled Homecoming
Lance returns with headaches and unusual physical abilities, but dismisses concern. Combat memories emerge, and Becca challenges his account of his service until he admits he has been in battle.
Key Events
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Lance Returns Home — Lance comes home after his military service has kept him away. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Farm
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Headaches Begin — After returning, Lance suffers headaches and displays unusual speed and strength. Characters: Lance
Location: Farm
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Lance Dismisses Concern — Lance brushes off concern and insists that he is no hero. Characters: Lance
Location: Farm
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Unusual Feats Impress Others — People around Lance are impressed by the speed and strength they have seen. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Combat Memories Surface — Lance experiences disturbing memories and visions of combat. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Becca Challenges His Account — Becca questions Lance's description of his military service. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Unspecified
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Battle Admission — Lance admits he has been in battle, contradicting what he previously told Becca. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Unspecified
Memory and Fear Fray
Lance becomes convinced that a former unit member is after him and later believes he has killed the man. A fellow soldier urges him to bury the body and flee with Becca, while her correction about her deceased father exposes Lance's confusion.
Key Events
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War's Lasting Burden — Lance struggles with what happened during the war; another soldier warns that painful experiences can leave more than memories. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Unit Member Pursuit — Lance becomes convinced that a former member of his unit is after him. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Lance Believes He Killed Him — Lance later believes that he has killed the former unit member. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Warning to Flee — A fellow soldier urges Lance to bury the body and flee with Becca, warning that others may come. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Lance Urges Becca to Leave — Lance tries to persuade Becca to leave with him. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Unspecified
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Becca Corrects His Memory — Becca tells Lance that her father has been dead since Lance's first period of service, though Lance believed he had seen him recently. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Unspecified
The Drug and the Need for Help
Those close to Lance reveal the unit's addiction to the experimental drug Minuteman and its connection to deaths among people. They believe Lance needs to be taken off it and receive professional help, but he trusts neither them nor the doctor they discuss.
Key Events
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Minuteman Drug Revealed — Those close to Lance reveal that members of his unit became addicted to the experimental drug Minuteman. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Drug Testing and Deaths — The men were used as test subjects, and the drug's effects contributed to many deaths. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Help Is Proposed — Those close to Lance believe he must be taken off the drug and needs professional help. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Lance Rejects Trust — Lance trusts neither the people trying to help him nor the doctor they discuss. Characters: Lance
Location: Unspecified
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Urgent Need for Help — Becca and the others face the task of getting Lance help before further violence harms him or someone else. Characters: Lance, Becca
Location: Unspecified