Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Veteran's Return
Luke and Tim navigate post-war life, searching for jobs and attending support groups while struggling with unspoken trauma. Domestic paranoia and marital strain begin to surface.
Key Events
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Veteran Job Search — Luke joins Tim in searching for employment after returning from Vietnam. Characters: Luke
Location: City streets
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Domestic Paranoia — Tim imagines an intruder and nearly harms his son during a dark search. Characters: Luke
Location: Tim's house
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Support Group Attendance — Luke and Tim attend separate gender-based support groups to address trauma. Characters: Luke
Location: Community center
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Men's Group Silence — Luke joins the men's group but remains unable to discuss his war experiences. Characters: Luke
Location: Support group
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Wife's Support Group — Paula attends a women's support group to cope with her husband's condition. Characters: Luke
Location: Women's group
Cracks in the Foundation
Luke's hope for marital reunion shatters when divorce papers arrive, triggering severe PTSD and combat imagination. A desperate phone call leads to a tragic outcome.
Key Events
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Divorce Papers Arrive — Luke learns his wife has filed for divorce, shattering his hope of reunion. Characters: Luke
Location: Luke's apartment
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Combat Imagination — Luke sits with a gun, mentally reliving combat scenarios due to severe PTSD. Characters: Luke
Location: Luke's apartment
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Phone Call & Gunshot — Tim hears a pistol shot over the phone and realizes Luke is in crisis. Characters: Luke
Location: Phone line
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Tragic Suicide — Tim arrives too late to find Luke's body being removed by authorities. Characters: Luke
Location: Luke's apartment
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Men's Group Silence — Luke joins the men's group but remains unable to discuss his war experiences. Characters: Luke
Location: Support group
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Rescue Attempt — Tim races to Luke's apartment to prevent a potential tragedy. Characters: Luke
Location: Luke's apartment
Echoes of Combat
Paula's inability to understand Tim's condition pushes him to seek VA help. Therapy sessions begin to unlock buried memories of wartime patrols and alliances.
Key Events
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Wife's Confusion — Paula struggles to comprehend Tim's vivid and painful war flashbacks. Characters: Luke
Location: Tim's home
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VA Office Visit — Tim finally seeks professional help at a veterans' administration facility. Characters: Luke
Location: Veterans' administration office
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Patrol Memory Trigger — Therapy prompts Tim to recall a patrol mission with Badman in Vietnam. Characters: Badman
Location: VA therapy room
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Well Discovery — The patrol discovers a well containing 26 dead and bound American soldiers. Characters: Badman
Location: Vietnam jungle
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Rat Infestation — The dead soldiers are found being consumed by rats, revealing war atrocities. Characters: Badman
Location: Well interior
The Well of Horrors
Tim confronts the brutal reality of the war through flashbacks of a well filled with dead POWs and a devastating ambush. The psychological weight of survival is fully revealed.
Key Events
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Rat Infestation — The dead soldiers are found being consumed by rats, revealing war atrocities. Characters: Badman
Location: Well interior
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Ambush Casualties — The patrol suffers heavy casualties during a sudden mortar and machine gun attack. Characters: Badman
Location: Vietnam battlefield
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PTSD Escalation — Tim's flashbacks intensify, blurring the line between past and present. Characters: Luke
Location: Tim's mind
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Memory Integration — Tim processes the traumatic memories of Badman and the ambush in therapy. Characters: Badman
Location: VA office
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Aftermath Reflection — The community grapples with the loss and the lingering effects of war. Characters: Luke
Location: City streets
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War Horror Revelation — The full scale of the POW massacre is revealed through Badman's memory. Characters: Badman
Location: Well site
Tim Murphy is a Vietnam Vet. When he loses his job he starts to relive all the pain and horror of his time in Vietnam. The stresses and strains nearly destroy his marriage and his family. Only after joining a veterans' therapy group does Tim find relief from his nightmares. With the support of his fellow vets and the love of his wife, Tim recovers. Written by Pfyre Caidmon