Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Chance Criminal Friendship
Seth and Marcy meet while shoplifting and quickly form a friendship. Their second encounter leads them to leave their familiar surroundings together.
Key Events
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Dollar Store Shoplifting — Seth and Marcy independently shoplift from the same dollar-type store. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Dollar-type store
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A Collision Becomes Friendship — The two crooks crash into each other, beginning an unexpected friendship. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Dollar-type store
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Ride to Weekend Work — Seth gives Marcy a ride to her weekend job. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Road to Marcy's weekend job
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Abusive Homecoming — Seth returns home to an abusive and mentally unstable household. Characters: Seth
Location: Seth's home
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Second Store Encounter — Seth encounters Marcy again at a different store the next day. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Another store
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Picking Up Belongings — Seth drives to Marcy's home and helps collect her personal belongings. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Marcy's home
Northbound and Unstable
The pair drives toward Canada in search of a black Barbie styling head. Marcy's tics and violent behavior intensify, while sex and alcohol provide only temporary relief.
Key Events
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Picking Up Belongings — Seth drives to Marcy's home and helps collect her personal belongings. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Marcy's home
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Drive Toward Canada — They begin driving north toward Canada to find a black Barbie styling head. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Road north
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Parking Lot Outburst — Marcy's tics become impossible to hide, and she attacks a man insulting Seth. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Parking lot
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Temporary Coping Methods — Sex and alcohol become the only described ways to suppress Marcy's tics and behavior. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Roadside stops
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Pharmacy Robbery Plan — In desperation for haloperidol, they attempt to rob a pharmacy. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Pharmacy
The Failed Pharmacy Escape
Desperate for haloperidol, Seth and Marcy rob a pharmacy. Seth is shot, their vehicle is damaged, and the escape ends in a crash.
Key Events
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Pharmacy Robbery Plan — In desperation for haloperidol, they attempt to rob a pharmacy. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Pharmacy
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Seth Shot in the Leg — The pharmacist catches them and shoots Seth in the leg with a shotgun. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Pharmacy
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Damaged-Tire Escape — They escape, but a tire is hit during the getaway. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Road outside the pharmacy
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Roadside Car Crash — The damaged vehicle becomes uncontrollable, and Marcy eventually crashes it. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Roadside
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Walter Tows the Truck — Walter finds the pair and tows their damaged truck to his property. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Roadside
Shelter Before Betrayal
Walter rescues the pair, treats Seth's wound, and teaches them survival skills. A deputy's visit triggers Marcy's violent attack on Walter and forces another escape.
Key Events
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Walter Tows the Truck — Walter finds the pair and tows their damaged truck to his property. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Roadside
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Walter Treats the Wound — Walter helps care for Seth's gunshot wound and gives the pair shelter. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Walter's home
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A Week of Survival Lessons — Walter spends a week teaching them how to shoot and catch fish. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Walter's property
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Deputy Searches for Them — A local deputy asks Walter whether he has seen Seth and Marcy. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Walter's property
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Marcy Attacks Walter — Marcy has a severe outburst and beats Walter after the deputy's visit. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Walter's property
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Flight in Walter's Truck — Seth and Marcy take off in Walter's truck and continue north. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Road away from Walter's property
The Impossible Happy Ending
Seth and Marcy reach Canada but cannot obtain the display Barbie head. Marcy is killed during the police confrontation, while Seth later sends Walter an apology and imagines a happier outcome.
Key Events
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Flight in Walter's Truck — Seth and Marcy take off in Walter's truck and continue north. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Road away from Walter's property
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Arrival in Canada — The pair reaches Canada and searches for the black Barbie head. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Canadian town
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Display Model Refused — The only black Barbie head is a display model, and the manager refuses to sell it. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Canadian store
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Final Store Outburst — Marcy has another violent outburst, causing the police to be called. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Canadian store
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Marcy Takes a Gun — When the police arrive, Marcy grabs a firearm from one officer. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Canadian store
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Fatal Police Confrontation — A second officer surprises Marcy from a side aisle and shoots her dead; Seth is arrested. Characters: Seth, Marcy
Location: Canadian store aisle
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Apology Letter to Walter — Walter reads Seth's apology letter, which includes twenty dollars. Characters: Seth, Walter
Location: Walter's home
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The Ending That Never Happened — Seth narrates a happy ending that did not happen while Walter reads the letter. Characters: Seth, Marcy, Walter
Location: Walter's home
An outsider and a young woman plagued by Tourette's syndrome meet and together journey to Canada.