Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Warning Across Dartmoor
Tam Burke and Rose Ellis travel through Dartmoor while radio reports warn of a growing nuclear crisis. A strange figure in the mist changes their light-hearted expedition into an unsettling mystery.
Key Events
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Dartmoor Expedition — Tam and Rose travel through Dartmoor while listening to alarming radio reports. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: Remote Dartmoor landscape
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Nuclear War Reports — Broadcasts warn that the international risk of nuclear war is increasing. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Radio Expert 2
Location: Dartmoor
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Figure in the Mist — They see what appears to be a black dog or a person standing on a rock. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: Rock in the Dartmoor mist
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Return to the House — Tam and Rose return from Dartmoor to the isolated house. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: Remote house
The House Turns Hostile
The couple returns to find the kitchen and belongings violently disturbed. Rose reports a tortured cry, the camera fails, and unexplained smells, power cuts, and movements make the house increasingly threatening.
Key Events
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Ransacked Kitchen — The kitchen and their belongings have been violently disturbed, but nothing is missing. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: House kitchen
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The Tortured Cry — Rose reports hearing a tortured baby crying and sensing an unseen presence. Characters: Rose Ellis, Tam Burke
Location: Remote house
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Camera Failure — Tam is frustrated because his camera failed to record the most important events. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: Remote house
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Candle Wax Smell — The couple notices the smell of candle wax and suspects something is inside the house. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: Remote house
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Power Cuts Begin — Power cuts accompany sudden temperature drops and unexplained movements. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller
Location: Remote house
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Harvey Sees the Past — Harvey becomes terrified after claiming to have seen someone from his past. Characters: Harvey Waller, Tam Burke, Rose Ellis
Location: Remote house
Crisis Outside, Terror Within
Harvey becomes terrified after seeing someone from his past while radio reports describe a worsening international crisis. Tam seeks Professor Chessman's help as the isolated house becomes both refuge and danger.
Key Events
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Crisis Broadcasts Continue — Radio reports announce that the international crisis is rapidly worsening. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Radio Expert 2
Location: Remote house
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House as Refuge — The isolated house feels both dangerous and strangely secure against the outside crisis. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller
Location: Remote house
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Tam Seeks Help — Tam contacts Professor Chessman about the increasingly serious events. Characters: Tam Burke, Professor Chessman
Location: Remote house
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Muriel Arrives to Investigate — Professor Chessman arranges for Muriel Roy to investigate the haunting. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy, Professor Chessman
Location: Remote house
Voices Beneath the House
Professor Chessman arranges Muriel Roy's investigation. Muriel senses suffering in the basement, warns against the spirit board, and contacts a distressed female spirit during a sitting.
Key Events
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Muriel Arrives to Investigate — Professor Chessman arranges for Muriel Roy to investigate the haunting. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy, Professor Chessman
Location: Remote house
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Suffering in the Basement — Muriel senses intense suffering and describes spirits trapped where they died. Characters: Muriel Roy, Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller
Location: House basement
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Spirit Board Warning — Muriel warns that a spirit board could invite a malevolent entity that is difficult to remove. Characters: Muriel Roy, Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller
Location: Remote house
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Distressed Female Spirit — During a sitting, Muriel contacts a distressed female spirit with an unfamiliar-sounding name. Characters: Muriel Roy, Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller
Location: Remote house
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The Investigation Deepens — The investigation becomes more serious than a search for ordinary evidence. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house
The Spirit Who Stays
Rose chooses to confront the evil presence after Tam shows her something connected to it. During the final séance, a controlling male spirit refuses to leave, and the group's fate remains uncertain after panic erupts.
Key Events
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Rose Faces the Haunting — After Tam shows Rose something connected to the entity, she insists on confronting the evil presence. Characters: Rose Ellis, Tam Burke, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house
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Final Séance Begins — The group conducts a final séance to confront the threatening presence. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house
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Powerful Male Spirit Speaks — A powerful male spirit claims to enjoy control and says he practiced black magic. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house
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The Spirit Refuses Departure — When asked whether he wants to leave, the male spirit refuses and says he is staying deliberately. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house
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Séance Descends into Panic — The spirit's influence becomes increasingly threatening and the séance erupts into panic. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house
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Uncertain Fate — The séance ends with the group's fate left uncertain. Characters: Tam Burke, Rose Ellis, Harvey Waller, Muriel Roy
Location: Remote house