Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Tijuana Tragedy
Bondo endures economic hardship while his father attempts a dangerous border crossing to send money home. The crossing ends in tragedy as the father loses his life, leaving Bondo alone.
Key Events
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Economic Repression — Bondo lives in severe economic hardship. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana, Mexico
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Border Crossing Plan — Father attempts to cross to send money home. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Border
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Father's Sacrifice — Father loses his life during the crossing attempt. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Border
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Bondo's Solitude — Bondo sets out on his own after the tragedy. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Streets
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Obstacles Emerge — Bondo encounters people holding him back. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Streets
Flight from Pursuit
Bondo sets out alone but quickly faces an array of people holding him back. The Chief of TJ policia, responsible for his father's death, actively hunts Bondo, creating a life-or-death chase.
Key Events
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Obstacles Emerge — Bondo encounters people holding him back. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Streets
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Police Pursuit Begins — The police chief actively hunts Bondo. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Streets
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Chief's Vengeance — The chief wants Bondo dead for his father's death. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Streets
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Deadly Border Attempt — Bondo attempts to cross the border himself. Characters: Bondo
Location: Tijuana Border
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Escape from Pursuers — Bondo evades capture after the deadly attempt. Characters: Bondo
Location: Border Zone
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Resourceful Invention — Bondo begins constructing a flying machine. Characters: Bondo
Location: Abandoned Workshop
The Flying Machine
After a deadly attempt to cross the border himself, Bondo resourcefully constructs a flying machine out of a wheelbarrow. He tests and navigates the improvised aircraft through the sky.
Key Events
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Resourceful Invention — Bondo begins constructing a flying machine. Characters: Bondo
Location: Abandoned Workshop
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Wheelbarrow Modification — Bondo modifies the wheelbarrow into an aircraft. Characters: Bondo
Location: Abandoned Workshop
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Flying Machine Assembly — The flying machine takes shape through resourcefulness. Characters: Bondo
Location: Abandoned Workshop
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First Flight Test — Bondo tests the newly built flying machine. Characters: Bondo
Location: Open Field
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Aerial Navigation — Bondo navigates the flying machine through the air. Characters: Bondo
Location: Sky
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Overcoming Obstacles — Bondo maneuvers past physical and environmental barriers. Characters: Bondo
Location: Sky
Arrival at the Pier
Bondo successfully navigates his flying machine to the Santa Monica pier. He lands safely and begins the process of completing his father's dream, bringing the journey to a close.
Key Events
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Overcoming Obstacles — Bondo maneuvers past physical and environmental barriers. Characters: Bondo
Location: Sky
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Approach to Coast — Bondo heads toward the Pacific coastline. Characters: Bondo
Location: Coastal Sky
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Santa Monica Landing — Bondo successfully lands near the pier. Characters: Bondo
Location: Santa Monica Pier
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Pier Arrival — Bondo steps onto the pier after his flight. Characters: Bondo
Location: Santa Monica Pier
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Dream Fulfillment Begins — Bondo begins to complete his father's dream. Characters: Bondo
Location: Santa Monica Pier
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Narrative Closure — The story concludes with Bondo moving forward. Characters: Bondo
Location: Santa Monica Pier
An economically repressed young man (Bondo) loses his father in his attempt to cross the border (to send money home) at Tijuana, Mexico. As Bondo sets out on his own, he encounters an array of people holding him back, including the Chief of TJ policia that killed his father, that now wants him dead too. After a deadly attempt at crossing the boarder himself, he resourcefully constructs a flying machine out of a wheel barrow and navigates himself to the Santa Monica pier. There he will begin to complete his fathers dream. Written by Mark Christensen