Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Ride Turns Dangerous
Ellen and Ben enter the elevator, but Hank's bloody arrival transforms an ordinary trip into a terrifying confinement. His claim about an alien creature creates immediate uncertainty.
Key Events
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Ellen Enters Elevator — Ellen leaves her workplace on floor 38 and presses the button for the parking garage. Characters: Ellen
Location: Workplace elevator
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Ben Joins the Ride — Ben, a burly workman, enters the elevator several floors below Ellen's workplace. Characters: Ellen, Ben
Location: Elevator
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Hank Runs Inside — Ellen holds the door after hearing a shout, allowing blood-covered Hank to enter. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Floor 4 elevator entrance
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Hank Reports a Creature — Hank says something resembling an alien is killing people outside and nearly caught him. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Security Override Revealed — Hank reveals that his security card has overridden the elevator controls. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
Control Behind Closed Doors
Hank reveals that his security card controls the elevator, provoking a struggle with Ben. The failed telephone and power loss make the trapped passengers increasingly desperate.
Key Events
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Security Override Revealed — Hank reveals that his security card has overridden the elevator controls. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Knife Drawn — Ben tries to take the card, so Hank pulls a knife to defend himself. Characters: Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Ben Restrain Hank — Ben physically restrains Hank while Ellen attempts to seek help. Characters: Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Telephone Fails — Ellen tries to call for help using the elevator telephone, but receives no assistance. Characters: Ellen
Location: Elevator
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Elevator Loses Power — The elevator rocks violently and the lights go out, intensifying the confinement. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Control Panel Opened — Ben uses Hank's knife to open the control panel and tries to operate the elevator. Characters: Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
The False Way Out
The elevator becomes operational, and the passengers reach floor 39 without seeing the alleged creatures. Ben attempts to leave through the stairs, but Ellen retreats after seeing the knife.
Key Events
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Hatch Escape Blocked — Ben tries to open the ceiling hatch, but Hank stops him and warns that the monsters will kill them. Characters: Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator ceiling
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Ellen Takes the Card — After the elevator becomes operational, Ellen wrestles the security card away and sends the elevator downward. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Ben Selects Floor 39 — Ben presses the button for floor 39 while the elevator continues its movement. Characters: Ben
Location: Elevator
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Empty Floor 39 — The doors open without revealing any alien creatures or visible attackers. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Floor 39
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Ben Leaves the Elevator — Ben exits and invites Ellen to leave with him through the stairs. Characters: Ellen, Ben
Location: Floor 39 elevator entrance
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Ellen Retreats Inside — Seeing Hank's knife in Ben's pocket, Ellen abandons the escape and returns to the elevator. Characters: Ellen, Ben
Location: Floor 39 elevator entrance
Something Above the Hatch
Hank stops the elevator when something attacks the ceiling hatch. The threat withdraws only after damaging the hatch, and Ben's mutilated corpse falls into the car.
Key Events
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Ellen Retreats Inside — Seeing Hank's knife in Ben's pocket, Ellen abandons the escape and returns to the elevator. Characters: Ellen, Ben
Location: Floor 39 elevator entrance
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Hatch Attack — Hank stops the elevator and holds the ceiling hatch shut as something tries to enter. Characters: Ellen, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Ben's Body Falls — The creature dents the hatch before stopping, and Ben's mutilated corpse falls into the elevator. Characters: Ellen, Ben, Hank
Location: Elevator
A Smile in the Garage
Ellen and Hank fight over the lost security card and control panel. Ellen kills Hank, reaches the garage, and greets the incoming crowd with a malevolent grin.
Key Events
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Card Falls Away — Ellen blames Hank, and their struggle sends the security card down the gap beside the floor. Characters: Ellen, Hank
Location: Elevator doorway
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Ellen Opens the Panel — Ellen uses the knife to open the control panel while Hank argues that staying inside is safer. Characters: Ellen, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Hank Is Stabbed — Ellen initially stabs Hank accidentally, then repeatedly stabs him until he is dead. Characters: Ellen, Hank
Location: Elevator
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Garage Doors Open — The elevator descends to the parking garage and its doors open. Characters: Ellen
Location: Parking garage
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Crowd Enters — A shouting and screaming group squeezes into the elevator as Ellen grins malevolently. Characters: Ellen
Location: Parking garage elevator
Ben and Ellen use the elevator in their building when all of a sudden, Hank, the blood covered security man of the building rushes into the elevator, claiming that there is a dangerous alien-like creature in the building.