Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Abuse Before The Retreat
Joy survives Derek's violent attack and discovers that he has killed her dog. Six months later, she has left him but remains deeply traumatized.
Key Events
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Derek Strangles Joy — Derek attempts to strangle Joy, but she fights him off and locks herself in a room. Characters: Joy, Derek
Location: Joy's house
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The Dog Is Killed — Joy leaves the locked room and discovers that Derek has killed her dog. Characters: Joy, Derek
Location: Joy's house
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Joy Leaves Derek — Six months later, Joy has left Derek and remains affected by the abuse. Characters: Joy, Derek
Location: Joy's house
Into The Haunted Forest
Carmen brings Joy to a therapeutic retreat led by Dr. Dunnley. The group travels through the forest, where Joy and Shaina discuss trauma and Joy begins suffering nightmares.
Key Events
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Retreat Invitation — Carmen invites Joy to a forest retreat led by Dr. Dunnley to address her trauma. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Dr. Dunnley
Location: Joy's home
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Journey Into The Forest — Joy and Carmen travel with Tara to meet Dr. Dunnley and Shaina in the forest. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara, Dr. Dunnley, Shaina
Location: Forest road
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Shared Trauma — Joy and Shaina discuss their respective traumas while travelling through the forest. Characters: Joy, Shaina
Location: Forest
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Nightmares Begin — Joy dreams about Derek and a monstrous creature during the first night. Characters: Joy, Derek, Creature
Location: Forest camp
Hallucinations Spread
Joy hears Derek's voice and Tara experiences visions of bound, bloody hands. Auditory hallucinations, an unseen strangling force, and the creature's presence make the retreat increasingly dangerous.
Key Events
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Derek's Voice — During a trust exercise, Joy hears Derek calling her name and questions Dunnley about their route. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Dr. Dunnley
Location: Forest
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Tara's Bloody Vision — Tara becomes separated from Shaina and hallucinates that her hands are bound and bloody. Characters: Tara, Shaina
Location: Forest
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Hallucinations Confirmed — Joy finds Tara and admits that she has also experienced hallucinations. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara
Location: Forest
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Voices In The Cavern — Joy experiences auditory hallucinations while the group moves through a cavern. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara, Dr. Dunnley, Shaina
Location: Cavern
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The Unseen Strangling — Joy sees Derek and the creature before an unseen force begins strangling her. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Creature
Location: Forest
The Group Collapses
Tara disappears, the supplies vanish, and Dunnley goes missing while searching for her. Shaina falls during a military hallucination, leaving Joy and Carmen increasingly isolated.
Key Events
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Tara Goes Missing — The group wakes to discover Tara missing and their supplies gone. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara, Dr. Dunnley, Shaina
Location: Forest camp
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Dunnley Disappears — Dunnley experiences hallucinations while searching for Tara and then disappears. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Dr. Dunnley
Location: Forest
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Shaina Falls — Shaina hallucinates her military past in Afghanistan and falls from a rock. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Shaina
Location: Rocky forest terrain
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Tara Found In Cave — Joy and Carmen find Tara hiding inside a cave while searching for the missing group members. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara
Location: Cave
Fire In The Cave
Tara is found, but the creature attacks the survivors and Tara sacrifices herself. After Carmen is kidnapped, Joy confronts the creature in Derek's form, burns it, and escapes with Carmen.
Key Events
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Creature Attacks The Group — The creature attacks, forcing Joy, Carmen, and Tara to hide among logs in a nearby river. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara, Creature
Location: Cave and nearby river
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Tara's Sacrifice — Tara sacrifices herself so Joy and Carmen can escape the creature. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Tara, Creature
Location: Nearby river
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Camp Treatment — Joy and Carmen return to camp and treat Carmen's injured leg. Characters: Joy, Carmen
Location: Forest camp
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Derek's Final Secret — Joy reveals that she saw Derek before leaving and knocked him out in self-defense. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Derek
Location: Forest camp
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Carmen Is Kidnapped — The creature kidnaps Carmen, forcing Joy to return to the cave. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Creature
Location: Forest camp
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Creature Set Ablaze — Seeing the creature as Derek, Joy embraces it briefly, then stabs and burns it. Characters: Joy, Carmen, Creature, Derek
Location: Cave
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Escape Toward Help — Joy and Carmen escape the cave with heavy injuries and set out for a hospital. Characters: Joy, Carmen
Location: Forest route to hospital
While recovering from an abusive relationship, Joy joins her friend's therapy group on an isolated mountainous retreat. Led by a doctor with experimental methods, the group is soon forced to confront a monstrous entity.