Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Marriage Under Strain
Jane and her spouse attend counseling with Dr. Angelo. Disputes about domestic responsibilities and feeling overwhelmed reveal the depth of their marital crisis.
Key Events
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Couple Attends Counseling — Jane and her spouse attend a counseling session with Dr. Angelo. Characters: Jane, Dr. Angelo
Location: Counseling office
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Household Dispute Surfaces — A dispute about chores, composting, work, and Jane's writing exposes the marriage's deterioration. Characters: Jane, Dr. Angelo
Location: Counseling office
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Feeling Unappreciated — The spouses argue about feeling unappreciated and overwhelmed. Characters: Jane, Dr. Angelo
Location: Counseling office
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Jane Requests Divorce — Jane says she wants a divorce and custody of their daughter. Characters: Jane, Dr. Angelo
Location: Counseling office
The Session Turns Fatal
Jane states that she wants a divorce and custody of their daughter. During a talking-stick exercise, the argument escalates and a sudden accident leaves Dr. Angelo dead.
Key Events
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Talking Stick Exercise — A counseling exercise with a talking stick fails to contain the couple's escalating argument. Characters: Jane, Dr. Angelo
Location: Counseling office
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Fatal Accident — A sudden accident during the escalating session leaves Dr. Angelo dead. Characters: Jane, Dr. Angelo
Location: Counseling office
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Family Consequences Considered — The couple realizes the accident could destroy their family and considers the consequences. Characters: Jane
Location: Counseling office
A Plan to Conceal the Accident
The couple weighs confession against the consequences for their family and chooses concealment. They plan to clear the office and use a return to a familiar Mexican restaurant as an alibi.
Key Events
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Confession Weighed — One spouse considers confessing to the police, but they decide to conceal the accident. Characters: Jane
Location: Counseling office
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Concealment Plan Formed — The couple plans to wait until the office is empty and remove traces of the accident. Characters: Jane
Location: Counseling office
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Alibi at Mexican Restaurant — They plan to return to a restaurant they visited before their daughter was born to establish an alibi. Characters: Jane
Location: Mexican restaurant
The Body and the Aftermath
They struggle to move Dr. Angelo's body, and Jane proposes taking it to a composting facility she knows from her work breaks. Afterward, they discuss the remaining evidence and briefly consider finding another therapist before postponing the conversation.
Key Events
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Body Moved from Office — The couple moves Dr. Angelo's body while struggling with its weight and an injured ankle. Characters: Jane
Location: Counseling office
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Composting Facility Proposed — Jane proposes taking the body to a composting facility, drawing on her experience bringing compost there during work breaks. Characters: Jane
Location: Composting facility
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Body Taken for Composting — They take the body to the facility, where Jane believes microorganisms will eventually break it down. Characters: Jane
Location: Composting facility
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Remaining Evidence Discussed — Afterward, the spouses discuss destroying the remaining evidence. Characters: Jane
Location: Unspecified
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Therapy Deferred Until Tomorrow — One spouse wakes the other while checking on them; they briefly consider a new therapist and postpone the conversation. Characters: Jane
Location: Unspecified