Plot Analysis Summary
A struggling writer moves between literary ideals, financial necessity, emotional pain, and an uncertain resolve to continue writing.
Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Writer Under Pressure
Mr. Lau struggles between his wish to write serious literature and the demands of serialized work. Eviction and a commercial screenplay offer expose his precarious livelihood.
Key Events
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Rainy-Day Drunken Encounter — Mr. Lau wakes after a drunken encounter and gives the woman half his modest salary. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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A Novelist's Private Ambition — He drinks to escape his thoughts and dreams of writing a serious novella. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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Serialized Fiction Deadline — An editor presses Mr. Lau for the next installment of his serialized martial fiction. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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An Invented Extravagance — Under deadline pressure, he invents an extravagant scene to keep the story moving. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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The Eviction Order — The landlord orders Mr. Lau to leave, citing concern that he may corrupt Mary. Characters: Mr. Lau, Mary
Location: Mr. Lau's rented room
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Freedom for Writers and Readers — Mr. Lau argues that writers and readers should be free, but cannot prevent the eviction. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Mr. Lau's rented room
The Magazine's Promise
Mr. Lau agrees to edit a proposed literary magazine in the hope of publishing worthwhile work. Financial strain and his mother's hospitalization make that hope difficult to sustain.
Key Events
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A Commercial Screenplay Offer — A former acquaintance offers him screenplay work and argues that commercial films need not be well written. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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The Magazine Proposal — A young woman proposes a literary magazine funded with her mother's savings, and Mr. Lau agrees to edit it. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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A Worthwhile Magazine Plan — Mr. Lau hopes the magazine can publish worthwhile work without resorting to pornography, despite his financial strain. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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His Mother's Hospitalization — His distressed mother is taken to hospital after drinking disinfectant. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Hospital
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Encouragement to Persist — The young woman urges Mr. Lau to keep writing and reminds him that great writers endured hardship and rejection. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
Work Without Inspiration
Mr. Lau refuses a charitable gift but turns to sensational newspaper writing to earn money. He negotiates a fee and asks for an advance.
Key Events
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A Refused Gift — Mr. Lau refuses a small charitable gift from a director. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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Sensational Newspaper Work — Short of money, Mr. Lau writes a sensational newspaper piece, negotiates its fee, and asks for an advance. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
Loss and Uncertainty
Lulu / Mak's news of her marriage hurts Mr. Lau, who drinks and recalls a traumatic wartime memory. He wakes injured in hospital, while her absence and his future remain unresolved.
Key Events
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Lulu's Change of Course — Lulu / Mak says she wants to leave dancing and become a housewife; later, she tells Mr. Lau she will marry a young client. Characters: Mr. Lau, Lulu / Mak
Location: Unspecified location
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A Wartime Memory Recalled — Hurt by Lulu / Mak's news, Mr. Lau drinks heavily and recalls a wounded classmate begging him to end his suffering. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Unspecified location
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Hospital After the Concussion — Mr. Lau wakes with a concussion and is unsure whether Lulu / Mak struck him with a bottle; she has been missing for days. Characters: Mr. Lau, Lulu / Mak
Location: Hospital
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The Unresolved Call to Write — A friend tells the injured, uninspired Mr. Lau that he must continue writing; the dialogue ends before his recovery is known. Characters: Mr. Lau
Location: Hospital