Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Face She Cannot Accept
Natalie grows up feeling unattractive and fails at several attempts to enter popular social life. Harold briefly gives her hope by valuing her inner qualities.
Key Events
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Natalie's Self-Doubt — Natalie grows up believing that her facial features make her homely. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Brooklyn
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Popular Friend Contrast — Natalie's insecurity is sharpened by comparison with a popular blonde cheerleader. Characters: Natalie Miller, Cheerleader
Location: Brooklyn school
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Cheerleader Attempt — Natalie's attempt to become a cheerleader fails. Characters: Natalie Miller, Cheerleader
Location: School
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Failed Social Tests — A blind date and Natalie's graduation dance both end unsuccessfully. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Brooklyn
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Harold Offers Hope — Harold tells Natalie that someone may value her inner qualities beyond her appearance. Characters: Natalie Miller, Uncle Harold
Location: Family home
Love, Loss, and Disillusionment
Harold's engagement undermines Natalie's faith in his advice, and his sudden death leaves her emotionally withdrawn. A later encounter with grief exposes the limits of outward beauty.
Key Events
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Harold Offers Hope — Harold tells Natalie that someone may value her inner qualities beyond her appearance. Characters: Natalie Miller, Uncle Harold
Location: Family home
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Harold's Engagement — Harold becomes engaged, causing Natalie to question his belief in inner qualities. Characters: Natalie Miller, Uncle Harold
Location: Brooklyn
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Harold's Unexpected Death — Harold dies unexpectedly, leaving Natalie deeply disillusioned. Characters: Natalie Miller, Uncle Harold
Location: Brooklyn
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Avoided Funeral — Natalie avoids attending Harold's funeral. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Brooklyn
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Shirley's Grief Revealed — Natalie encounters a grieving woman whose drug use reveals the damage caused by Harold's death. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Brooklyn
Breaking From Home
Natalie's parents worry about her lack of work and romantic prospects. Discovering the attempt to arrange her marriage to Morris pushes her to leave home.
Key Events
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Shirley's Grief Revealed — Natalie encounters a grieving woman whose drug use reveals the damage caused by Harold's death. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Brooklyn
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Parents' Marriage Pressure — Natalie's parents worry about her future and attempt to arrange dates. Characters: Natalie Miller, Morris
Location: Family apartment
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The Bribery Scheme — Natalie discovers that her father tried to bribe Morris into marrying her. Characters: Natalie Miller, Morris
Location: Family apartment
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Natalie Moves Out — Angry over the marriage scheme, Natalie leaves her parents' apartment. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Family apartment
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Empty Manhattan Apartment — Natalie arrives in Manhattan and learns that the apartment is vacant. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Greenwich Village apartment building
A New Life in Greenwich Village
Natalie establishes herself in Manhattan, repairs the vacant apartment, and begins working as a cocktail waitress. She meets David, whose artistic life attracts her.
Key Events
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Empty Manhattan Apartment — Natalie arrives in Manhattan and learns that the apartment is vacant. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Greenwich Village apartment building
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A New Working Life — Natalie fixes up the apartment and obtains work as a cocktail waitress. Characters: Natalie Miller
Location: Topless Bottomless Club
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David Becomes Neighbor — Natalie meets David, an architect pursuing painting downstairs. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: Greenwich Village apartment building
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Natalie Models — David calls Natalie's face interesting and asks her to model for him. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: David's apartment
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Friendship Becomes Romance — Their friendship develops into romance as they encourage each other's aspirations. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: Greenwich Village
Love With a Boundary
David and Natalie fall in love, but Natalie discovers that he has a wife and two sons. After confronting him, she ultimately leaves a farewell letter and chooses independence.
Key Events
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Friendship Becomes Romance — Their friendship develops into romance as they encourage each other's aspirations. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: Greenwich Village
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David's Marriage Revealed — Natalie learns that David is married and has two young sons. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: David's apartment
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The Final Confrontation — David says he loves Natalie and promises to end his marriage and return. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: David's apartment
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Farewell Letter — Natalie leaves a letter and chooses responsibility for her own happiness. Characters: Natalie Miller, David Harris
Location: David's apartment