Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Risky Beginning
Rachel meets Mark at a wedding and becomes involved with him despite warnings about his womanizing. Their rapid courtship leads Rachel toward a marriage about which she remains uncertain.
Key Events
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Wedding First Meeting — Rachel and Mark meet at a mutual friend's wedding despite Mark's reputation as a womanizer. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Mutual friend's wedding
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Warnings Ignored — Rachel becomes involved with Mark even after receiving warnings about his serial womanizing. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: New York
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Whirlwind Courtship — Rachel and Mark begin a rapid courtship that leads toward marriage. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: New York
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Wedding Reservations — Rachel has reservations about marrying Mark before the ceremony. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: New York City apartment
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Marriage Ceremony — Rachel is persuaded to proceed, and she and Mark marry. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: New York City apartment
Domestic Fault Lines
Rachel and Mark marry and settle into a dilapidated Washington townhouse. Renovation stress gives way to renewed closeness when Rachel becomes pregnant, followed by the danger of her difficult labor.
Key Events
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Marriage Ceremony — Rachel is persuaded to proceed, and she and Mark marry. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: New York City apartment
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Townhouse Purchase — Rachel and Mark purchase a dilapidated townhouse in Washington. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington townhouse
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Renovation Strain — The unfinished house and continuing renovations create stress in the marriage. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington townhouse
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Pregnancy Brings Closeness — Rachel discovers she is pregnant, bringing her and Mark closer together. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington townhouse
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Difficult First Labor — Rachel experiences difficult labor while the baby's life is briefly threatened. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Hospital
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Annie Is Born — Rachel gives birth to a healthy baby girl, Annie. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Hospital
Betrayal and Separation
After the birth of Annie, Rachel discovers Mark's affair with Thelma during another pregnancy. She leaves for New York, resumes her career, and struggles with longing for Mark.
Key Events
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Annie Is Born — Rachel gives birth to a healthy baby girl, Annie. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Hospital
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Affair Evidence Found — Rachel discovers evidence of Mark's affair with Thelma during her pregnancy with their second child. Characters: Rachel, Mark, Thelma Rice
Location: Washington townhouse
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Rachel Leaves Mark — Rachel leaves Mark and takes Annie to New York. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington
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Writing Job Restored — Richard gives Rachel her job back as a food writer. Characters: Rachel, Richard
Location: New York
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Rachel Pines for Mark — Rachel rejects immediate romantic progress with Richard while waiting for official separation and longing for Mark. Characters: Rachel, Mark, Richard
Location: New York
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Therapy Group Robbery — Rachel inadvertently leads a burglar to group therapy, where he robs the group and takes her wedding ring. Characters: Rachel
Location: Therapist's apartment
A Fragile Reconciliation
A stolen wedding ring and Mark's promise persuade Rachel to return. She remains suspicious, while her rumor about Thelma produces another confrontation inside the marriage.
Key Events
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Therapy Group Robbery — Rachel inadvertently leads a burglar to group therapy, where he robs the group and takes her wedding ring. Characters: Rachel
Location: Therapist's apartment
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Mark Requests Return — Mark asks Rachel to come back and promises he will never see Thelma again. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: New York
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Reconciliation Attempt — Rachel returns to Mark but repeatedly checks his belongings to monitor his honesty. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Unfinished Washington townhouse
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Rumor About Thelma — Rachel tells Betty a rumor that Thelma has herpes, provoking Thelma's anger. Characters: Rachel, Betty, Thelma Rice, Mark
Location: Supermarket
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Mark Confronts Rachel — Mark tells Rachel that Thelma visited and was angry about the rumor. Characters: Rachel, Mark, Thelma Rice
Location: Washington townhouse
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Second Labor Begins — Rachel's water breaks, and Mark takes her to give birth to their second child. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington townhouse
The Final Exposure
The returned ring leads Rachel to discover that Mark has resumed the affair. She confronts him at a dinner party and leaves Washington permanently with both children.
Key Events
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Second Labor Begins — Rachel's water breaks, and Mark takes her to give birth to their second child. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington townhouse
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Ring Returned — New York police return Rachel's wedding ring after catching the burglar. Characters: Rachel
Location: New York
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Necklace Betrayal Revealed — A jeweler's question makes Rachel realize Mark bought the necklace for Thelma, proving the affair resumed. Characters: Rachel, Mark, Thelma Rice
Location: Jeweler's shop
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Ring Sold — Rachel sells her wedding ring immediately after realizing Mark has resumed the affair. Characters: Rachel
Location: Jeweler's shop
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Key Lime Confrontation — At a dinner party, Rachel reveals that she knows about the affair by shoving a key lime pie into Mark's face. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington townhouse
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Final Departure — Rachel leaves Mark permanently and takes both children to New York. Characters: Rachel, Mark
Location: Washington to New York