Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Film That Will Not Be Made
Victor pitches a low-budget film about Pétain's final days, but the producer rejects it and proposes an erotic comedy instead. Victor refuses and threatens legal action over the possible use of his Joan of Arc script.
Key Events
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Victor Pitches a Pétain Film — Victor pitches a low-budget film about Pétain's final days. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Producer's office
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The Producer Rejects the Proposal — The proposal is rejected as commercially unviable. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Producer's office
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An Erotic Comedy Is Suggested — The producer suggests reshaping Victor's idea into an erotic comedy. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Producer's office
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Victor Defends His Joan of Arc Idea — Victor threatens legal action if any part of his script is used. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Producer's office
The Weight of Self-Discipline
Victor attempts dieting and exercise but finds both difficult and unpleasant. Corinne supports his diet at home, even as Victor struggles to resist food and drink.
Key Events
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Victor Faces Pressure About His Weight — Victor is confronted about his weight and decides to try dieting and exercise. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Unspecified
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The Diet Proves Miserable — Victor struggles with strict meals and resisting food and drink. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Home
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Victor Struggles With Exercise — Jogging exhausts Victor, and a mishap with quick-setting cement complicates his efforts. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Unspecified
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Corinne Supports Victor's Diet — Corinne supports Victor's diet as he struggles to resist food and drink. Characters: Victor Lasnier, Corinne
Location: Home
An Unexpected Intimacy
When Victor cannot get a taxi, Patricia offers him a ride, and their conversation becomes flirtatious. At her home, Victor admits that he loves someone else while recognizing that this encounter is new to him.
Key Events
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Patricia Gives Victor a Ride — Unable to get a taxi, Victor accepts a ride from Patricia. Characters: Victor Lasnier, Patricia
Location: Unspecified
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Their Conversation Turns Flirtatious — Victor and Patricia flirt during their conversation, and she takes him to her home. Characters: Victor Lasnier, Patricia
Location: Patricia's car
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Victor Acknowledges His Conflicted Feelings — Victor says he nearly lives with someone he loves while acknowledging the encounter is new to him. Characters: Victor Lasnier, Patricia
Location: Patricia's home
A Meeting and an Uncertain Reunion
Victor learns that his film opportunity has passed and responds by abandoning his diet for an extravagant meal. At a Weight Watchers meeting, Patricia explains her feelings and calls a gentleman to stand, leaving the possible reunion unresolved.
Key Events
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Victor's Film Opportunity Closes — The producer says it is too late; he has already signed with another colleague. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Producer's office
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Victor Abandons His Diet — Frustrated and hungry, Victor orders an extravagant meal. Characters: Victor Lasnier
Location: Restaurant
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Victor and Patricia Meet Again — Patricia joins a Weight Watchers meeting and encounters Victor again. Characters: Victor Lasnier, Patricia, Gilberte, des Weight Watchers, Marcel, des Weight Watchers
Location: Weight Watchers meeting
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Patricia Calls Out a Gentleman — Patricia says she has found the older, stout man she loves and asks a gentleman to stand. Characters: Victor Lasnier, Patricia
Location: Weight Watchers meeting