Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Illness and Experimental Hope
Ed's pain and collapse lead to hospitalization, where Lou learns about his part-time work. Doctors diagnose a life-threatening illness, and Ed agrees to experimental cortisone treatment.
Key Events
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Ed Suffers Pain and Blackouts — Ed's severe pain and blackouts alarm Lou. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Avery home
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Ed Collapses at Home — Ed collapses, prompting his hospitalization. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Avery home
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Lou Learns About Dispatch Work — A cab driver reveals Ed's part-time work helping pay bills. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Hospital room
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Ed Promises No More Secrets — Ed and Lou kiss, and he says there are no more secrets. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Hospital room
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Doctors Diagnose Arterial Disease — Ed is diagnosed with polyarteritis nodosa and given months to live. Characters: Ed Avery, Dr. Norton
Location: Hospital
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Ed Begins Cortisone Treatment — Ed agrees to experimental cortisone treatment. Characters: Ed Avery, Dr. Norton
Location: Hospital
Recovery Gives Way to Excess
Ed initially improves and reconnects with Lou and Richie. He then abuses cortisone, lies to obtain more, and becomes increasingly insulting and aggressive.
Key Events
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Ed Recovers and Rejoins Family — Ed improves and spends more time with Lou and Richie. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery, Richie Avery
Location: Avery home
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Ed Abuses His Prescription — Ed takes more cortisone and lies to obtain additional medication. Characters: Ed Avery
Location: Unspecified
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Ed Insults a Parent — Ed insults a mother about her child's intelligence and disregards Wally's warning. Characters: Ed Avery, Wally Gibbs
Location: Parent-Teacher Association meeting
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Wally Warns Lou About Ed — Wally tells Lou about Ed's abrasive conduct; Ed returns and insults them. Characters: Wally Gibbs, Lou Avery, Ed Avery
Location: Avery home
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Ed Forges a Prescription — Ed impersonates a doctor and forges a prescription for more cortisone. Characters: Ed Avery
Location: Local pharmacy
A Family Under Threat
Wally warns Lou that high-dose cortisone may cause psychosis, but Ed rejects her concern and continues to mistreat his family. Richie tries to remove the pills as Ed's behavior escalates into a threat against Lou and Richie.
Key Events
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Football Turns Aggressive — Ed pushes Richie too hard during football as Lou watches. Characters: Ed Avery, Richie Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Avery home
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Wally Explains Cortisone Risk — Wally tells Lou high doses may cause psychosis. Characters: Wally Gibbs, Lou Avery
Location: Unspecified
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Ed Rejects Lou's Concern — Ed dismisses Lou's warning, saying he will die if his disease returns. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Avery home
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Ed Forces Richie to Study — Ed keeps Richie up late and verbally abuses him over mathematics. Characters: Ed Avery, Richie Avery
Location: Richie's bedroom
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Ed Announces Divorce — At dinner, Ed says that he wants to divorce Lou. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Avery home
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Richie Takes the Pills — Richie raids Ed's medicine cabinet to remove the cortisone pills. Characters: Richie Avery, Ed Avery
Location: Avery home
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Ed Threatens His Family — Ed describes a murder-suicide plan and locks Lou in a closet. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery, Richie Avery
Location: Avery home
Intervention and Recognition
Wally interrupts Ed's attack and subdues him, after which Ed is hospitalized and sedated. Dr. Norton explains the risks, and Ed eventually recognizes Lou and Richie during their visit.
Key Events
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Wally Stops Ed's Attack — Richie flees as Wally arrives and beats Ed unconscious. Characters: Ed Avery, Wally Gibbs, Richie Avery, Lou Avery
Location: Avery home
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Ed Recognizes His Family — After sedation, Ed recognizes Lou and Richie and embraces them. Characters: Ed Avery, Lou Avery, Richie Avery, Dr. Norton
Location: Hospital room