Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Evangelist's Daughter
Grace grows up within a traveling evangelist church and performs dangerous religious entertainment. Her longing for her biological father becomes the central private obsession beneath her public identity.
Key Events
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Orphaned Childhood — Grace is orphaned and adopted by a traveling evangelist church. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: California
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Hell Show Performance — As an adult, Grace performs a high dive in the church's Hell-themed shows. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Traveling church grounds
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Desert Visit — Grace's fiancé drives into the desert to visit her church event. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Antelope Valley
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Refused Sexual Advance — Grace refuses a sexual advance while privately struggling with desire. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Church encampment
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Search For Her Father — Grace searches for her biological father with intense personal obsession. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: California
The Father Returns
Grace locates her father at a morgue and witnesses his apparent return to life. She brings him to the farm, where his hostility and violence destabilize her surroundings.
Key Events
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Search For Her Father — Grace searches for her biological father with intense personal obsession. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: California
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John Reaches The Morgue — Grace identifies her father among the dead at the morgue. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John, The Undertaker
Location: Local morgue
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Morgue Murder — The apparently revived father figure murders the undertaker. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John, The Undertaker
Location: Local morgue
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Return To The Farm — Grace brings John back to the farm where she is staying. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John
Location: Dilapidated farm
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Father Rejects Reverend — John behaves abrasively toward the religious leader at the farm. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John
Location: Dilapidated farm
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Barn Kiss — Grace begins kissing the religious leader in the barn after his declaration of love. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Barn
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Axe Murder — John witnesses the kiss and kills the religious leader with an axe. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John
Location: Barn
Blood Under Straw
A romantic encounter in the barn ends in murder. Grace hides the body and begins to question whether her father is real, while the consequences spread beyond the farm.
Key Events
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Axe Murder — John witnesses the kiss and kills the religious leader with an axe. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John
Location: Barn
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Corpse Beneath Straw — Grace returns to the barn and finds the murdered man buried under straw. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Barn
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Garbage Dump Disposal — Grace disposes of the body at a dump near the property. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Garbage dump
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Doubt About John — Grace begins to suspect that her father may be imaginary. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John
Location: Abandoned farmhouse
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Shirley Receives Care — Shirley receives personal care for severe depression from Grace's fiancé. Characters: Shirley
Location: Los Angeles apartment building
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Shirley And Fiancé Sleep Together — Shirley and Grace's fiancé have sex in the apartment building. Characters: Shirley
Location: Los Angeles apartment building
Jealousy At The Farm
Grace learns that her fiancé has had sex with Shirley and becomes increasingly suspicious. The discovery of another murdered lawman brings the investigation directly to the farm.
Key Events
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Shirley And Fiancé Sleep Together — Shirley and Grace's fiancé have sex in the apartment building. Characters: Shirley
Location: Los Angeles apartment building
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Hospital Visit Fails — Grace visits the hospital but cannot speak with her fiancé. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Los Angeles hospital
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Police Car Discovery — The murdered lawman is found stuffed inside his police car. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Farm property
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Sheriff At The Farm — A lawman investigating the property is murdered by an attacker with a scythe. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Farm property
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Jealous Confession — Grace tells John that she fears her fiancé is cheating with Shirley. Characters: Grace MacDonald, John
Location: Farmhouse
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Visitors Arrive — Grace's fiancé and Shirley arrive to check on her. Characters: Grace MacDonald, Shirley
Location: Farm property
The Mind Unmasked
Grace attacks the arriving couple with an axe before being sedated. Authorities reveal that her father was imaginary and that Grace herself committed the murders.
Key Events
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Visitors Arrive — Grace's fiancé and Shirley arrive to check on her. Characters: Grace MacDonald, Shirley
Location: Farm property
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Barn Trap — Grace lures her fiancé to the barn, where he sees the corpse in the police car. Characters: Grace MacDonald, Shirley
Location: Barn
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Axe Attack — Grace smashes the car windows with an axe as the pair attempts to escape. Characters: Grace MacDonald, Shirley
Location: Farm driveway
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Thiopental Restraint — Grace's fiancé subdues her and injects her with thiopental. Characters: Grace MacDonald, Shirley
Location: Farm driveway
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Psychosis Revealed — A detective explains that Grace imagined her father and committed the murders herself. Characters: Grace MacDonald, Shirley
Location: Farm property
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Grace Taken Away — Grace apologizes for her imagined father's crimes before police take her away. Characters: Grace MacDonald
Location: Farm property