Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Haunted Workspace
Peter's research team arrives at Taskerlands and learns that one stone room remains unfinished because builders refuse to enter it. The team hears a woman's death and begins investigating the room's history.
Key Events
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Research Mission Established — Peter leads a team developing a recording medium for Ryan Electric Products. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Ryan Electric Products
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Arrival at Taskerlands — The research team moves into the renovated Victorian mansion. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley, Roy Collinson
Location: Taskerlands mansion
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The Unfinished Room — Roy explains that builders refused to work in the supposedly haunted room. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley, Roy Collinson
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Saxon Foundations Revealed — The room's foundations are said to date back to the Saxon era. Characters: Peter Brock, Roy Collinson
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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The Room Is Explored — The researchers enter the room and hear a woman running followed by a scream. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Jill Sees the Apparition — Jill sees a woman running up the steps and apparently falling to her death. Characters: Jill Greeley
Location: Stone steps in the room
A Medium in Stone
Historical records connect the room to a maid's death, while Peter proposes that the stone has preserved the event. Jill develops a theory that the phenomenon is played through the human nervous system rather than detected by instruments.
Key Events
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Jill Sees the Apparition — Jill sees a woman running up the steps and apparently falling to her death. Characters: Jill Greeley
Location: Stone steps in the room
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The Maid's Death Record — Roy finds a record of a young maid who died in the room in 1890. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley, Roy Collinson
Location: Taskerlands records
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Exorcism Records Sought — Peter and Jill ask the Vicar for records of an unsuccessful exorcism. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley, Vicar
Location: Local vicar's archive
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The Stone Tape Theory — Peter proposes that the stone preserved an image of the girl's death. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Sensory Differences Observed — Devices detect nothing, while different researchers experience different sensory phenomena. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Jill Explains Playback — Jill theorizes that the recording activates the human nervous system. Characters: Jill Greeley, Peter Brock
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
The Failed Experiment
The researchers bombard the room with technology but cannot produce the phenomenon reliably. The apparent disappearance of the presence and the loss of corporate confidence push Peter away from the investigation.
Key Events
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Jill Explains Playback — Jill theorizes that the recording activates the human nervous system. Characters: Jill Greeley, Peter Brock
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Technology Bombards the Room — The team uses every available instrument to trigger the stone tape on demand. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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The Phenomenon Disappears — Peter cannot create a predictable trigger, and Jill says the presence seems to be gone. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Corporate Confidence Collapses — Peter's superiors lose confidence and require him to share the site with another team. Characters: Peter Brock
Location: Taskerlands
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Peter Abandons the Room — Peter resumes earlier projects and rejects Jill's warnings about the room. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Taskerlands
Buried Across Ages
The Vicar uncovers evidence of an exorcism from 1760, proving that the phenomenon predates the house. Jill realizes that the maid's death may have covered an ancient recording, but Peter suppresses her work.
Key Events
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The Earlier Exorcism — The Vicar returns with records placing the exorcism in 1760. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley, Vicar
Location: Taskerlands records
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Older Recordings Discovered — Jill concludes that the maid's death masked a much older recording. Characters: Jill Greeley, Peter Brock
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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Jill Is Forced Away — Peter dismisses Jill's findings and forces her to take two months of leave. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Taskerlands
The Final Playback
Jill returns to the room and encounters the degraded, malevolent older recording, dying while trying to escape it. Peter later discovers that the stone has captured a new recording of Jill screaming his name.
Key Events
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Jill Faces the Presence — Jill returns and is overwhelmed by the malevolent older recording. Characters: Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands
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The New Recording — After Jill's death, Peter discovers a clear recording of her screaming his name. Characters: Peter Brock, Jill Greeley
Location: Stone room at Taskerlands