Plot Analysis Summary
The story follows several damaged relationships as physical touch, professional identity, and emotional loyalty become intertwined.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Refusal of Touch
Abby develops an aversion to skin just as Jesse asks her to move in. Her condition causes her to leave work and destabilizes their relationship.
Key Events
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Abby Develops Skin Aversion — Abby, a massage therapist, develops an intense aversion to skin. Characters: Abby
Location: Abby's work
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Jesse Proposes Moving In — Jesse asks Abby to move in with him as her aversion begins. Characters: Abby, Jesse
Location: Jesse's apartment
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Abby Takes Leave — Abby takes a temporary leave of absence because touch has become unbearable. Characters: Abby
Location: Abby's work
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Touch Damages Relationship — Abby cannot touch Jesse or allow him to touch her. Characters: Abby, Jesse
Location: Jesse's apartment
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Ecstasy Suggestion — Abby suggests taking ecstasy obtained from Bronwyn. Characters: Abby, Jesse, Bronwyn
Location: Jesse's apartment
A Practice Transformed
Paul's failing dental practice changes after he accidentally cures Henry. The apparent healing success attracts new clients and encourages Paul to seek Reiki from Bronwyn.
Key Events
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Abby Rejects Cohabitation — Abby decides not to move in with Jesse. Characters: Abby, Jesse
Location: Jesse's apartment
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Paul's Practice Declines — Paul struggles financially as the family dental practice loses patients. Characters: Paul, Jenny
Location: Family dentistry practice
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Henry Receives Cleaning — Jenny brings Henry for a routine cleaning, displeasing Paul. Characters: Paul, Jenny, Henry
Location: Family dentistry practice
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Henry Is Accidentally Cured — Paul accidentally cures Henry's temporomandibular joint dysfunction. Characters: Paul, Henry
Location: Family dentistry practice
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Healing Reputation Grows — News of Paul's healing powers attracts new clients. Characters: Paul
Location: Family dentistry practice
Collapse of Confidence
A disgruntled patient publicly calls Paul a fraud, after which his new patients disappear. Jenny is distressed by her father's return to his former state.
Key Events
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Paul Seeks Reiki — Paul visits Bronwyn to learn Reiki and improve his treatments. Characters: Paul, Bronwyn
Location: Bronwyn's home
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Patient Denounces Paul — A disgruntled patient collapses while screaming that Paul is a fraud. Characters: Paul
Location: Family dentistry practice
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Practice Loses Its Patients — Paul's fortunes reverse, and the other patients disappear. Characters: Paul, Jenny
Location: Family dentistry practice
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Jenny Runs Out Crying — Jenny runs out of the office after watching Paul revert to his former self. Characters: Paul, Jenny
Location: Family dentistry practice
Uncertain Escapes
Abby leaves Jesse and moves in with Paul before taking ecstasy and wandering through a park. Adrian brings her to his grandmother's home, where she briefly regains the ability to touch.
Key Events
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Abby Leaves Jesse — Abby leaves Jesse a break-up note and moves in with Paul. Characters: Abby, Jesse, Paul
Location: Jesse's apartment
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Abby Takes Ecstasy — Abby takes an ecstasy pill and wanders through a park. Characters: Abby
Location: Park
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Adrian Helps Abby — Adrian takes Abby to his grandmother's home, where she can touch him. Characters: Abby, Adrian
Location: Adrian's grandmother's home
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Paul Kisses Bronwyn — Paul takes the remaining ecstasy tablet and eventually kisses Bronwyn. Characters: Paul, Bronwyn
Location: Bronwyn's home
A Difficult Return
Paul takes the remaining tablet and kisses Bronwyn. Jenny tests Jesse's feelings, but he refuses her because he loves Abby; Abby finally returns and hugs Jesse.
Key Events
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Jenny Tests Jesse's Loyalty — Jenny attends Henry's concert with Jesse and asks him to kiss her. Characters: Jenny, Jesse, Henry
Location: Jesse's apartment
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Abby Hugs Jesse — After Jenny falls asleep there, Abby arrives and is able to hug Jesse. Characters: Abby, Jesse, Jenny
Location: Jesse's apartment