Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Photographs and Marital Strain
Nadine asks Raymond to return her photographs, but he refuses. Her arguments with Vernon reveal a strained marriage and his interest in Renée.
Key Events
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Nadine Requests the Photographs — Nadine asks Raymond to return her photographs, saying he promised they might earn her money. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Raymond Escobar
Location: Raymond Escobar's studio
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Raymond Refuses — Raymond refuses, arguing that Nadine agreed to the photographs and was paid. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Raymond Escobar
Location: Raymond Escobar's studio
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Marital Quarrel — Nadine and Vernon quarrel about his behavior and interest in Renée. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vernon Hightower
Location: Unspecified
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Risky Nighttime Errand — Vernon draws Nadine into entering a place without permission; she worries about the legal consequences. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vernon Hightower
Location: Unspecified place entered at night
Risky Plans and Hidden Leverage
Vernon draws Nadine into a nighttime errand and pursues a deal with Dwight involving maps and photographs. Nadine secretly takes a bill showing Vernon's debt, while Vera helps her obtain her pay early.
Key Events
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Vernon Pitches a Deal — Vernon asks Dwight for cash for a maps-and-photographs deal and promises a share of the profits. Characters: Vernon Hightower
Location: Unspecified
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Vernon's Obligations Accumulate — Vernon juggles obligations involving his struggling bar, unpaid bills, and promises to Renée. Characters: Vernon Hightower
Location: Unspecified
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Nadine Takes the Bill — Nadine secretly takes a bill showing what Vernon owes and keeps it as leverage. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vernon Hightower
Location: Her boss's office
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Vera Advances Nadine's Pay — Vera helps Nadine obtain her pay early after Nadine says she needs to leave town quickly. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vera
Location: Unspecified workplace
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Vera Asks About Vernon — Vera asks whether Nadine's request to leave quickly has something to do with Vernon and the baby. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vera
Location: Unspecified workplace
Deals Unravel
Vernon's dealings bring him into conflict with Buford Pope and his associates. Disputes over a garment and an engagement add to the confusion as a map changes hands.
Key Events
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Dealings Turn Against Vernon — Vernon's dealings bring him into conflict with Buford Pope and Pope's associates. Characters: Vernon Hightower, Buford Pope
Location: Unspecified
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Garment and Engagement Dispute — A dispute involving a garment and an engagement adds to the conflict and confusion. Characters: Vernon Hightower, Buford Pope
Location: Unspecified
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Map Changes Hands — A map changes hands as the parties' plans unravel. Characters: Vernon Hightower, Buford Pope
Location: Unspecified
The Armed Standoff
Mountain discovers his car and pistol are missing as Vernon attempts to formalize an arrangement with Pope. Pope demands Nadine's release, Vernon's explosives threat fails to settle matters, and Dwight turns against him. The excerpt ends with the group forced to move and the outcome unresolved.
Key Events
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Mountain Finds His Car Missing — Mountain discovers that his car and pistol are missing. Characters: Mountain
Location: Unspecified
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Pope Demands Nadine's Release — Vernon tries to formalize his arrangement with Pope, who says he kept his bargain and demands Nadine be released. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vernon Hightower, Buford Pope
Location: Unspecified place of confrontation
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Vernon Threatens Explosives — Vernon threatens that the place could be destroyed with explosives, but the threat does not settle the dispute. Characters: Vernon Hightower, Buford Pope
Location: Unspecified place of confrontation
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Dwight Turns on Vernon — Dwight turns against Vernon as the group orders Vernon and the others inside at gunpoint. Characters: Vernon Hightower
Location: Unspecified place of confrontation
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Forced to Move — Vernon and the others are forced to move, leaving the confrontation unresolved. Characters: Nadine Hightower, Vernon Hightower
Location: Unspecified