Story Structure — 6 Plot Phases
The Weapon Under Threat
A revolutionary device is demonstrated at the university and immediately targeted by masked criminals. Its inventor destroys the original, but the existence of a duplicate keeps the threat alive.
Key Events
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Cyclotrode Demonstration — A device detects and fells a model airplane during a faculty demonstration. Characters: Maxwell
Location: University faculty meeting
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Attempted Device Theft — Two masked criminals attempt to steal the experimental device.
Location: University
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The Device Is Destroyed — The inventor destroys the original device to keep it from the criminals.
Location: University
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Richards Fights the Henchmen — Richards fights the attackers; one escapes and the other dies when his collar is removed. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: University
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Duplicate Device Revealed — The professors learn that a duplicate device is stored in a bonded warehouse. Characters: Duncan Richards, Maxwell
Location: University faculty meeting
The Collar and the Chase
The criminal leader controls the inventor and forces him to retrieve the duplicate device. Richards pursues them, but the Cyclotrode nearly sends his car over a cliff.
Key Events
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Forced Retrieval Mission — A controlled inventor retrieves the duplicate device for the masked criminal.
Location: Bonded warehouse
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Car Chase at the Cliff — The device disrupts Richards's car, nearly sending it over a cliff. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Mountain road
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A Larger Device Ordered — The masked criminal demands a more powerful device capable of crippling cities.
Location: Mansion hideout
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Death Ray Trap — A death ray is built as a trap, and Richards nearly enters its path. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Criminal hideout
The Fatal Countermeasure
The inventor is ordered to create a city-scale weapon but secretly constructs a death ray. Richards reaches the hideout, and the inventor dies while preventing the trap from killing him.
Key Events
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Death Ray Trap — A death ray is built as a trap, and Richards nearly enters its path. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Criminal hideout
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Inventor Stops the Ray — The inventor leaps forward to save Richards and is killed by the weapon. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Criminal hideout
The Search for Heavy Water
The criminal organization fails to obtain heavy water and refined uranium, then captures a secretary aiding Richards. Richards removes the control collar and exposes an infiltrator.
Key Events
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Heavy Water Theft Fails — The criminal organization unsuccessfully attempts to steal heavy water.
Location: Industrial facility
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Uranium Truck Targeted — A truckload of refined uranium is targeted as an alternative source for heavy water production.
Location: Roadway
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Secretary Captured — A secretary assisting Richards is captured and fitted with a control collar. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Criminal hideout
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Collar Removal Attempt — Richards works with medical staff to remove the collar without killing the wearer. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: University
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Disguised Infiltrator Exposed — The apparent doctor is exposed as the escaped criminal who had infiltrated the procedure. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: University
The Mountain Laboratory
Richards tracks the criminals to a mountain laboratory, where a fire allows them to escape with heavy water. He then creates a warehouse ruse to draw out the masked leader.
Key Events
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Mountain Laboratory Fire — Richards tracks the criminals to the laboratory; a fight causes a fire and the criminals escape with heavy water. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Mountain laboratory
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Warehouse Fingerprint Ruse — Richards announces a fingerprint check while secretly using the warehouse as a trap. Characters: Duncan Richards, Maxwell
Location: University faculty meeting
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Warehouse Ambush — Richards and an ally mistake a professor for the masked criminal, and the professor is killed when the real criminal arrives. Characters: Duncan Richards, Maxwell
Location: Warehouse
The Mask Falls
A mistaken suspicion at the warehouse narrows the university suspect group. Richards follows the trail to the mansion, destroys the larger Cyclotrode, and unmasks the Crimson Ghost.
Key Events
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Suspect Circle Narrows — With two professors dead, Richards narrows the possible identities to Maxwell or another surviving professor. Characters: Duncan Richards, Maxwell
Location: University
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Dog Tracks the Escape Route — Richards and his ally use a dog to trace the escaped criminal to the mansion hideout. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Estate grounds
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Larger Cyclotrode Completed — The masked criminal and his henchmen complete a larger Cyclotrode in the hideout. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Mansion laboratory
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Cyclotrode Destroyed — Richards shoots the larger device and unmasks the Crimson Ghost. Characters: Duncan Richards
Location: Mansion laboratory
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Ghost Identity Revealed — Back at the university, the captured Crimson Ghost is revealed to be Professor Parker. Characters: Duncan Richards, Maxwell
Location: University