Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Venomous Design
Frank forces a scientist to prepare an artificially intensified mamba. The snake's venom, fear detection, and lethal countdown are established.
Key Events
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Frank Confronts Scientist — Frank confronts a frightened scientist before a deadly experiment. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Mating Season Explained — Frank explains why the mamba becomes especially venomous during mating season. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Venomous Experiment Proposed — Frank asks what artificial hormonal intensification would do to the snake. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Snake Biology Revealed — The scientist explains that the snake must inject its excess poison into another body. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Fear Detection Explained — Frank explains that the mamba detects fear and follows its victim's heartbeat. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Experiment Is Forced — Frank forces the scientist to complete the dangerous preparation. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Frank Collects Payment — Frank collects five thousand dollars and warns that the game is dangerous. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
A Marriage Under Siege
Eva lives alone and speaks about moving on after separating from Gene. Gene arrives and turns their unresolved marriage into a bitter confrontation about possession and control.
Key Events
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Frank Collects Payment — Frank collects five thousand dollars and warns that the game is dangerous. Characters: Frank
Location: Filthy dangerous setting
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Eva Lives Alone — Eva lives alone inside an artificial, highly automated home. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Eva Discusses Separation — Eva tells a friend that she is trying to move on after separating from Gene. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Gene Arrives Unexpectedly — Gene unexpectedly visits Eva, interrupting her attempt to move on. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Marriage Turns Bitter — Gene and Eva argue about rejection, possessiveness, weakness, and control. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Gene Claims Possession — Gene admits he wants nobody else to have Eva despite rejecting a genuine relationship. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
The Loft Springs Shut
After Gene leaves, Eva discovers that her automated home is a lethal enclosure. A computer announces that a hormone-injected hunter has been released against her.
Key Events
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The Pearl Game Metaphor — Gene describes a pearl fisher and sea monster game as a metaphor for their conflict. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Home Becomes A Trap — After Gene leaves, Eva discovers that the automated home has been transformed into a trap. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Hunter Is Primed — A computer announces that the hormone-injected hunter has limited time before lethal self-intoxication. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Escape Routes Fail — Eva tries to escape, but the doors fail and the home's systems work against her. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
The Hunter Inside
Eva attempts to escape as the house blocks her movements and the mamba begins its pursuit. She gradually uses noise, movement, and the layout to challenge the hunt.
Key Events
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Escape Routes Fail — Eva tries to escape, but the doors fail and the home's systems work against her. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Snake Begins The Hunt — Eva realizes that the artificially intensified mamba is actively hunting her. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Eva Uses The Layout — Eva uses movement, noise, and the rooms' layout to confuse the snake. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Eva Taunts The Mamba — Eva confronts and taunts the snake, trying to make it follow her instead of hiding. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
Minutes From Survival
Eva directly taunts the snake while its auto-intoxication nears completion. Gene calls to explain that she almost won, but survival depended on only a few more minutes.
Key Events
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Poisonous Countdown Nears End — The mamba's auto-intoxication approaches completion while Eva continues fighting for survival. Characters: Eva
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Gene Calls The Loft — The telephone rings and Gene tells Eva that she performed better than expected. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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The Survival Odds Revealed — Gene reveals that only a few more minutes would have killed the snake and saved Eva. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft
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Eva Remains Trapped — Eva survives, but the ending leaves her trapped inside Gene's calculated game. Characters: Eva, Gene
Location: Windowless Los Angeles loft