Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Hidden Tenant
Jan and Nick move into an old San Francisco apartment and uncover a message about Maxie Malone. The landlady explains Maxie's past as a reckless actress who died before her major audition.
Key Events
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Moving Into the Apartment — Jan and Nick move into an old San Francisco apartment house. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Old apartment house in San Francisco
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Message Beneath Wallpaper — They uncover a message declaring that Maxie Malone lived there. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
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Landlady Explains Maxie — The landlady explains that Maxie was a 1920s actress and party girl. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment house
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Maxie's Fatal Crash — Maxie reportedly died in a car crash before her major audition. Characters: Jan / Maxie
Location: San Francisco, recalled past
A Voice From Film
Nick finds the few surviving minutes of Maxie's film and watches them with Jan. Maxie's voice and partial apparition then appear in the apartment, although Nick dismisses the experience.
Key Events
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The Surviving Film — Nick finds the few surviving minutes of Maxie's movie legacy. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
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Watching Maxie's Footage — Nick and Jan watch the recovered footage together before going to bed. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
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The Voice Interrupts Sleep — A voice stops Nick and asks him to play Maxie's footage again. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
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Maxie Materializes — Maxie partially materializes before Nick, who replays the film for her. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
Possession at the Party
Nick accepts a party invitation despite Jan's nervousness. Maxie takes control of Jan, drinks, performs by the piano, and openly flirts with the people around her.
Key Events
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Nick Dismisses the Apparition — Maxie disappears, and Nick dismisses the incident as a psychotic episode. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
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Invitation to the Party — Nick accepts an invitation for himself and Jan to attend a social party. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Nick's workplace
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Jan Faces Social Anxiety — Jan feels nervous about attending the high-society gathering with Nick. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Party venue
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Maxie Takes Control — Maxie possesses Jan and behaves far more boldly than Jan normally would. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Party venue
Reckless Night Out
Maxie and Nick break into an amusement park and kiss on a merry-go-round. A Policeman catches them but releases them after Nick offers an excuse.
Key Events
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The Piano Performance — Maxie drinks, dances seductively, and sings a vamp version of Bye Bye Blackbird. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Party venue
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Breaking Into the Amusement Park — Drunk, Maxie and Nick enter an amusement park after hours. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Amusement park
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Kiss on the Merry-Go-Round — Maxie and Nick make out on a merry-go-round. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Amusement park
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Caught by the Policeman — The Policeman catches them, but lets them go after Nick gives an excuse. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick, Policeman
Location: Amusement park
The Audition Release
The characters seek a way to end the possession and discover that a Cleopatra audition can fulfill Maxie's unfinished ambition. Maxie succeeds, moves on, and leaves Jan more confident and free.
Key Events
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Searching for a Release — The possession must end so Jan can resume her own life. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Apartment
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Cleopatra Audition — The possible solution appears in an audition for the lead role in Cleopatra. Characters: Jan / Maxie
Location: Film audition
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Maxie Dazzles the Audition — Maxie takes over and impresses everyone during the Cleopatra audition. Characters: Jan / Maxie
Location: Film audition
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Maxie's Afterlife Success — After becoming a successful actress, Maxie moves on in the afterlife and leaves Jan freer. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: Film production
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Jan's New Freedom — Jan becomes happier and more comfortable expressing her sexuality. Characters: Jan / Maxie, Nick
Location: San Francisco