Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Orders Beneath the Surface
The Lionfish is introduced through wartime restrictions and disputed reports about its fate. Admiral Roberts is connected to the orders that prevent normal access to the submarine.
Key Events
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Lionfish Restricted — The submarine operates under strict wartime restrictions connected to Admiral Roberts. Characters: Admiral Roberts
Location: USS Lionfish
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Roberts Orders Cited — A lieutenant says the captain's lack of access follows Admiral Roberts's orders. Characters: Admiral Roberts
Location: USS Lionfish
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Wartime Fate Investigated — Reports question the official account of the submarine's wartime location and fate. Characters: Admiral Roberts
Location: Wartime records
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Permission Granted — Garmin gives Peter, Stacey, and their companions permission to board the submarine. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: Classified submarine site
The Classified Expedition
Mr. Garmin grants Peter Williams, Stacey, and their companions permission to board the submarine. Radio broadcasts, malfunctioning equipment, and conflicting perceptions make the expedition increasingly unsettling.
Key Events
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The Group Boards — The expedition group enters the long-classified submarine expecting an unusual investigation. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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Radio Broadcasts Orders — The submarine's radio begins broadcasting naval commands despite its classified status. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish radio room
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Equipment Acts Strangely — The submarine's equipment behaves unpredictably while the group searches for rational explanations. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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Conflicting Perceptions — Some members see things that others cannot, increasing uncertainty inside the submarine. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey
Location: USS Lionfish
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Rational Explanations Sought — Peter and the others try to explain the submarine's behavior while determining its purpose. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
Caught in History
The group discovers that the submarine appears to be operating during a wartime attack. Depth charges fall outside, and the group realizes that it may be trapped inside the historical assault.
Key Events
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Wartime Attack Revealed — The group discovers that the submarine appears to be operating during a historical wartime attack. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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Depth Charges Fall — Vessels outside treat the Lionfish as a German submarine and drop depth charges. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: Waters outside USS Lionfish
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Historical Trap Recognized — The group realizes it may be trapped inside the historical assault associated with the submarine. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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Radio Cannot Reach Attackers — The group determines that the radio cannot reach the attackers at their depth. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish radio room
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Torpedo Signal Proposed — They discuss using the torpedo tube to send a signal to the attacking vessels. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish torpedo room
A Signal Under Fire
Because the radio cannot reach the attackers, the group considers using a torpedo tube to send a signal. They prepare a torpedo and debate whether debris can serve as a decoy.
Key Events
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Torpedo Preparation Begins — The group attempts to prepare a torpedo by relying on old submarine procedures. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish torpedo room
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Submarine Seems Helpful — The submarine's actions appear to help the group while they prepare the signal attempt. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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Debris Decoy Considered — The group considers making a traditional decoy from debris during the continuing attack. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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American Identity Prioritized — They decide the attackers must know they are Americans rather than believe the submarine is abandoned. Characters: Peter Williams, Stacey, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
The Technology Standoff
Garmin insists that Peter's research tablets be placed in a box so future technology will not enter the past. Peter resists, and Garmin points a gun at him while the danger remains unresolved.
Key Events
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Tablet Storage Demanded — Garmin orders Peter to place his research tablets in a box to prevent future technology transfer. Characters: Peter Williams, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish
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Gunpoint Standoff — Peter resists, and Garmin points a gun at him while the group remains trapped in danger. Characters: Peter Williams, Mr. Garmin
Location: USS Lionfish