Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Bill Paid Too Late
Bob Hunt tries to help his client Dr. Martha after her electricity is cut off over an unpaid bill. Community contributions and a coin payment fail to restore her power.
Key Events
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Martha Loses Electricity — Bob's client loses electricity because she cannot pay the bill. Characters: Bob Hunt, Dr. Martha
Location: Dr. Martha's home
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The Unpaid Bill — The unpaid utility bill establishes the immediate crisis. Characters: Bob Hunt, Dr. Martha
Location: Dr. Martha's home
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Neighbors Raise Contributions — Neighbors and friends contribute money toward Martha's bill. Characters: Dr. Martha
Location: Dr. Martha's neighborhood
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Payment In Coins — The bill is paid entirely in coins, creating an administrative problem. Characters: Dr. Martha
Location: Utility payment office
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Clerk Rejects Coin Quantity — The clerk is belatedly told that such a large quantity of coins is not accepted.
Location: Utility payment office
Cold Consequences
A communications failure prevents reconnection, and Dr. Martha is hospitalized with hypothermia. Bob's professional concern turns into a vendetta against utility support systems.
Key Events
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Reconnection Communication Failure — A communications snafu prevents the electric company from reconnecting Martha's power. Characters: Dr. Martha
Location: Electric company offices
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Martha Hospitalized — Martha is taken to hospital suffering from hypothermia. Characters: Bob Hunt, Dr. Martha
Location: Hospital
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Hunt Begins Revenge — Hunt launches a vendetta against the systems responsible for the crisis. Characters: Bob Hunt
Location: City utility network
The Finger Emerges
Bob sabotages several systems and leaves behind a distinctive raised-finger impression. The news media give the unknown saboteur the name The Finger.
Key Events
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Support Systems Sabotaged — Hunt sabotages assorted support systems to retaliate against the utilities. Characters: Bob Hunt
Location: Utility support sites
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Escape Through Wet Paint — Hunt presses against a wet-painted wall while attempting to evade detection. Characters: Bob Hunt
Location: A sabotaged facility
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The Finger Is Named — A raised-finger impression leads the news media to nickname the saboteur The Finger. Characters: Bob Hunt
Location: News media coverage
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Phone Company Hit — The phone company is hit, and its billing records are sabotaged. Characters: Bob Hunt
Location: Telephone company systems
A City Takes Advantage
After the phone company is attacked, it denies that free long-distance calls are possible. People immediately exploit the apparent breakdown in billing.
Key Events
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Company Denies Free Calls — The phone company publicly denies that long-distance calls can be made free of charge.
Location: Public statement
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Long Distance Exploited — People make extravagant long-distance calls, including playing music overseas.
Location: Telephone users' homes
The Finger Takes The Stand
At a public hearing over a utility rate increase, citizens protest before Bob confesses to being The Finger. Others claim the identity as Marion arrives with a revelation about Knight.
Key Events
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Rate Hike Hearing Opens — A public commission considers Knight's rate-hike proposal for Eastern Gas & Electric. Characters: Bob Hunt, Kenneth Knight
Location: Public commission courtroom
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Citizens Protest Rates — Protesting citizens are given an opportunity to speak before the commission votes. Characters: Bob Hunt, Kenneth Knight
Location: Public commission courtroom
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Hunt Confesses Publicly — Hunt declares, "I am The Finger," taking responsibility for the sabotage. Characters: Bob Hunt, Kenneth Knight
Location: Public commission courtroom
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Others Claim The Finger — Many people rise in a Spartacus-style gesture and claim to be The Finger. Characters: Bob Hunt
Location: Public commission courtroom
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Knight's Sabotage Revealed — Marion arrives to arrest Hunt but reveals that Knight destroyed his own substations for sympathy. Characters: Bob Hunt, Marion Edwards, Kenneth Knight
Location: Public commission courtroom
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The City Goes Dark — The city's lights go dark as spectators celebrate in the courthouse. Characters: Bob Hunt, Marion Edwards, Kenneth Knight
Location: Courthouse and city