Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Strike Story Meets the Studio
Paul brings a screenplay based on his experience of the miners' strike to Golden Pictures. The executives reshape its setting and casting, prompting Paul to question the production's direction.
Key Events
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Paul Pitches His Strike Script — Paul presents a screenplay based on his experience of the 1984 Miners' Strike. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Golden Pictures offices
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Executives Propose Mine Rescue — Executives propose a dramatic rescue in a mine, and Paul points out the mine would not be operating during a strike. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Golden Pictures offices
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Al Pacino Is Cast — Paul objects to casting Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill because they have little in common. Characters: Paul, Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Film production offices
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The Setting Moves to the 1930s — The executives reject the modern town's appearance and decide to set the film in the 1930s. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Mining town location scout
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A Miner Is Rejected for the Role — Paul promises a former miner a role, but executives say he does not look like their idea of a miner. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Mining town
The Price of Staying
The studio demands a happier ending and pays Paul to remain after he considers cancelling the film. He accepts the cheque, allowing the production's distortions to deepen.
Key Events
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The Star Buys a Cottage — Unimpressed with his hotel, Al Pacino buys a roadside house and evicts its resident. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Roadside house
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The Ending Is Rewritten — The studio demands a happy victory ending instead of Paul's tragic ending for the strike. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity, Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Film production offices
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Paul Accepts the Cheque — The executive pays Paul's friend to leave and Paul to stay; Paul accepts the money and agrees to write the demanded ending. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity, Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Film production offices
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The Town Is Remade for Film — Golden Pictures alters the modern town and rejects actual miners who do not fit its stereotype. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Film set in the mining town
Distortion on Screen
The production turns the miners' story into a stereotyped, anachronistic melodrama. Paul is troubled by his complicity and sees increasingly sensational footage, including abuse of the invented Mrs Scargill.
Key Events
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The Film's Invented Marriage — The footage portrays Scargill in an anachronistic town and invents a wife troubled by his political commitment. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill, Meryl Streep as Mrs Scargill
Location: Film-within-the-film tavern and town
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Paul Is Accused of Complicity — A nightmare voice accuses Paul of helping misrepresent miners by taking the money; the executive then requests a scandalous scene. Characters: Paul
Location: Paul's home
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Paul Rejects the Scandalous Scene — Paul attempts the requested scene but tells Al Pacino it does not fit the story. Characters: Paul, Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Film production setting
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Footage Shows Mrs Scargill Abused — Paul watches footage in which miners physically abuse Scargill's invented wife to send him a message. Characters: Paul, Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill, Meryl Streep as Mrs Scargill
Location: Film screening room
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A Mine Accident Raises the Stakes — Scargill learns of an accident and is told that his daughter is underground; he narrowly escapes. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Mine
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Miners Threaten a Reactor — Scargill learns disgruntled miners have taken dynamite and plan to blow up a nuclear reactor. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Dynamite store
A Triumphant Ending, A Bitter Return
The fictional Scargill races to Parliament to stop a planned attack, and the film gives him a sweeping political victory. Paul returns home to protests against the film's portrayal and destroys his typewriter.
Key Events
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The Film Becomes an Action Romance — The completed film is promoted as an action romance, and Paul reacts with horror and drinks heavily. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Publicity tour
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Scargill Delays the Attack — Scargill persuades the miners to wait until he has spoken with Parliament at three o'clock. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Mining community
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Scargill Races to Parliament — Scargill borrows a motorcycle and reaches London as Big Ben strikes three. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Road to London
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Miners Hear the Parliament Broadcast — The miners hear that Scargill has entered Parliament and hold off detonating the explosives. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill
Location: Mining community and Parliament
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Parliament Grants the Demands — Scargill speaks about patriotism and democracy; Parliament unanimously accepts the strike demands as his family joins him. Characters: Al Pacino as Arthur Scargill, Meryl Streep as Mrs Scargill
Location: Parliament
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Paul Returns to His Hometown — After the executive praises the film's success, Paul sees townspeople protesting its misrepresentation and smashes his typewriter. Characters: Paul, Film Exec/Camp Actor 2/Celebrity
Location: Hometown cinema and pasture