Plot Analysis Summary
A young marriage is tested by financial dissatisfaction, a risky business deal, social embarrassment, separation, and eventual reconciliation.
Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Money Behind the Marriage
The couple's first year of marriage is strained by dissatisfaction with their finances. A promised business opportunity becomes the husband's way of offering hope.
Key Events
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One Year of Marriage — The married couple has reached its first anniversary year.
Location: The couple's home
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Dissatisfaction Emerges — The wife becomes discontented with the couple's financial situation.
Location: The couple's home
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Dreams of More Money — The wife expresses her wish that they had more money.
Location: The couple's home
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Business Promise — The husband consoles her by promising success in a prospective business deal.
Location: The couple's home
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Dinner Invitation — Mr. Barstow is invited to dinner as part of the planned business effort. Characters: Mr. Barstow
Location: The couple's home
Dinner Stakes Rise
The husband arranges a dinner for Mr. Barstow to support a real estate deal. Hattie's inexperience makes the dinner less ideal than planned.
Key Events
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Real Estate Proposal — The husband prepares to involve Mr. Barstow in a profitable real estate transaction. Characters: Mr. Barstow
Location: The couple's home
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Barstow's Position — Mr. Barstow is established as a railroad executive with influence relevant to the deal. Characters: Mr. Barstow
Location: Dinner setting
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Dinner Preparations — Hattie handles preparations for the important dinner. Characters: Hattie
Location: The couple's home
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Inexperienced Service — Hattie's inexperience makes the dinner less successful than intended. Characters: Hattie, Mr. Barstow
Location: Dinner table
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Dinner Becomes Awkward — The flawed dinner threatens the polished presentation needed for the business arrangement. Characters: Hattie, Mr. Barstow
Location: Dinner table
A Dangerous Interruption
Dick Loring arrives and a conversational slip threatens the business arrangement. The pressure surrounding the deal intensifies the couple's private conflict.
Key Events
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Dick Loring Arrives — Dick Loring arrives while the dinner and business discussion are underway. Characters: Dick Loring, Mr. Barstow
Location: Dinner setting
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Conversation Slip — A conversational slip creates a risk to the proposed deal. Characters: Dick Loring, Mr. Barstow
Location: Dinner setting
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Deal Under Threat — Dick's arrival and the slip together threaten to spoil the real estate transaction. Characters: Dick Loring, Mr. Barstow
Location: Dinner setting
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Marital Quarrel — The spouses quarrel as the business pressure intensifies.
Location: The couple's home
Separation and Excess
The spouses quarrel, and the wife leaves for her mother's home. The husband responds by getting drunk while the unresolved deal remains at risk.
Key Events
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Wife Leaves — The wife leaves the home and goes to her mother.
Location: The couple's home
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Husband Drinks — The husband gets drunk after the marital separation.
Location: The couple's home
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Deal Reconsidered — Despite the earlier complications, the business arrangement with Mr. Barstow remains active. Characters: Mr. Barstow
Location: Business meeting place
Success and Reconciliation
The husband closes the deal with Mr. Barstow and follows his wife. Their marriage is restored through reconciliation.
Key Events
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Business Deal Closes — The husband successfully closes the deal with Mr. Barstow. Characters: Mr. Barstow
Location: Business meeting place
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Husband Follows — After closing the deal, the husband follows his wife to her mother's home.
Location: Road to the mother's home
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Marital Reconciliation — The spouses reconcile after the business and marital crises.
Location: The mother's home