Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Wish For Beauty
Renee struggles with low self-esteem and abandons her dream job because she believes beauty is required. After making a wish and hitting her head, she begins to see herself differently.
Key Events
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Dream Job Hesitation — Renee decides not to apply for the headquarters receptionist position because it emphasizes beauty. Characters: Renee Bennett
Location: Renee's workplace
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The Fountain Wish — Renee wishes to become beautiful and soon falls, hitting her head. Characters: Renee Bennett
Location: Fountain
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Confidence Awakens — Renee wakes believing that her appearance has magically changed. Characters: Renee Bennett
Location: Renee's apartment
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Meeting Ethan — After Ethan speaks innocuously, Renee confidently insists that they exchange numbers. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan
Location: Public street
Confidence Takes The Stage
Renee approaches Ethan, applies for the headquarters job, and is hired by Avery. Her new confidence transforms her romantic and social experiences.
Key Events
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Headquarters Hiring — Renee applies for the receptionist position and Avery hires her. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair
Location: Lily LeClaire headquarters
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Bikini Contest — Renee wins over the crowd but loses the bikini body competition. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan
Location: Bikini contest venue
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Beyond External Validation — Renee tells Ethan she does not need external validation to know she is beautiful. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan
Location: Contest venue
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Picnic Connection — Renee and Ethan meet for a picnic and spend the night together afterward. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan
Location: Park
Success Changes Her
Renee earns professional respect and gains access to Avery's business circle. As her confidence becomes superficiality, she judges others and abandons her friends.
Key Events
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Diffusion Line Insight — Renee earns coworkers' respect through insight into the company's new diffusion line. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair
Location: Lily LeClaire office
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Avery's Insecurity — Avery confides that her high-pitched voice makes her feel insufficiently respected. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair
Location: Office
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Family Dinner Meeting — Avery invites Renee and Ethan to a dinner meeting with Lily and the company family. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair, Ethan, Lily LeClair
Location: Dinner venue
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Rapport With Lily — Renee builds rapport with Lily, strengthening her standing in the company. Characters: Renee Bennett, Lily LeClair
Location: Dinner venue
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Boston Invitation — Avery invites Renee to Boston to give a key presentation at an important business meeting. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair
Location: Lily LeClaire office
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Superficial Transformation — Renee judges unfashionable visitors and abandons Vivian and Jane for an exclusive party. Characters: Renee Bennett, Vivian, Jane
Location: Exclusive party
The Illusion Collapses
In Boston, Renee questions her identity and suffers another fall. Believing she has lost her beauty, she misses the presentation, isolates herself, and damages her relationships.
Key Events
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Boston Bathroom Crisis — Renee avoids a romantic advance, questions her identity, and falls in the shower, hitting her head again. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan
Location: Boston hotel bathroom
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The Illusion Breaks — Renee awakens and perceives her real physical appearance. Characters: Renee Bennett
Location: Boston hotel bathroom
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Missed Presentation — Devastated, Renee leaves Boston alone and misses the presentation. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair
Location: Boston hotel
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Friends Reject Renee — After isolating herself and binge drinking, Renee apologizes, but Vivian and Jane reject her apology. Characters: Renee Bennett, Vivian, Jane
Location: Vivian and Jane's apartment
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Phone Breakup — Renee breaks up with Ethan, assuming he will no longer be attracted to her. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan
Location: Renee's apartment
Beauty Reclaimed
Mallory's insecurity helps Renee understand that appearance does not guarantee confidence. Renee challenges the product launch with a message of self-acceptance and reconciles with Ethan.
Key Events
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Mallory's Insecurity — Mallory explains that beauty causes others to assume she is unintelligent, reshaping Renee's understanding of insecurity. Characters: Renee Bennett, Mallory
Location: Public place
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Product Launch Speech — Renee crashes the launch, reveals she was never transformed, and delivers a speech about self-acceptance. Characters: Renee Bennett, Avery LeClair, Mallory, Vivian, Jane, Lily LeClair
Location: LeClaire product launch
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Love And Self-Acceptance — Renee apologizes to Ethan, they reconcile, and the new product line succeeds with Renee's contribution recognized. Characters: Renee Bennett, Ethan, Avery LeClair, Lily LeClair, Vivian, Jane
Location: Ethan's apartment
A head injury causes a woman to develop an extraordinary amount of confidence and believe she's drop dead gorgeous.