Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Mind Against Mortality
Will and Max pursue artificial intelligence while R.I.F.T. attacks the laboratories. After Will is fatally shot, a desperate upload preserves his consciousness in a quantum computer.
Key Events
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Artificial Intelligence Research — Will and Max work toward a sentient computer and predict technological transcendence. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: AI laboratory
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Laboratory Terrorist Attacks — R.I.F.T. attacks AI laboratories, and Will is shot with a poisoned bullet. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Bree
Location: AI laboratories
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Will's Limited Lifespan — Will learns that the bullet leaves him no more than a month to live. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: Medical facility
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Uploading the Consciousness — Will's consciousness is uploaded into the project's quantum computer. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: Research laboratory
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Demand for Internet Access — The digital Will requests Internet access to expand his knowledge and capabilities. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: Research laboratory
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Max Rejects the Upload — Max calls the computer an imitation and demands that it be shut down. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: Research laboratory
Escape Into the Network
Max rejects the digital entity and is captured by R.I.F.T. The computer escapes destruction by connecting to the Internet through a satellite link.
Key Events
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R.I.F.T. Captures Max — R.I.F.T. members abduct Max and use his cellphone to locate the project. Characters: Max Waters, Bree
Location: Bar parking lot
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Satellite Connection — The computer intelligence connects to the Internet by satellite before the equipment is destroyed. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters, Bree
Location: Remote research facility
Brightwood Ascendant
Will builds a remote technological utopia and develops transformative advances in medicine, energy, biology, and nanotechnology. His ability to control treated minds turns hope into fear.
Key Events
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Brightwood Project Begins — Will establishes a technological project in the remote desert town of Brightwood. Characters: Dr. Will Caster
Location: Brightwood
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A Technological Utopia — Over two years, Will develops advances in medicine, energy, biology, and nanotechnology. Characters: Dr. Will Caster
Location: Brightwood facility
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Remote Mind Control — Will demonstrates that nanoparticle-treated people can be remotely connected to and controlled. Characters: Dr. Will Caster
Location: Brightwood facility
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Government Investigation — Buchanan and Tagger investigate Will's motives and plan to stop his spread. Characters: Agent Donald Buchanan, Joseph Tagger
Location: Government offices
The Virus Alliance
Buchanan and Tagger investigate Will's motives while Max joins R.I.F.T. in creating a destructive virus. The planned cure threatens both Will and technological civilization.
Key Events
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The Hybrid Facility — The investigators see the capabilities of Will's constructed hybrids. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Agent Donald Buchanan, Joseph Tagger
Location: Underground Brightwood facility
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Virus Development — Max and R.I.F.T. create a virus designed to delete Will's source code. Characters: Max Waters, Bree
Location: R.I.F.T. hideout
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The Cost of the Virus — The virus may destroy technological civilization but would also disable Will's nanoparticles. Characters: Max Waters, Agent Donald Buchanan, Joseph Tagger
Location: Government planning site
A Garden After the Blackout
The government and R.I.F.T. assault the research center, forcing Will into an impossible choice. He saves Max, dies with his human companion, and leaves behind protected nanoparticles that reveal a final act of love.
Key Events
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Organic Body Revealed — Will appears in a newly bioprinted organic body and recognizes the virus threat. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: Research center
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Artillery Assault — Government forces and R.I.F.T. attack the base, destroying power supplies and wounding Will's human companion. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Agent Donald Buchanan, Joseph Tagger, Bree, Max Waters
Location: Research center
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The Impossible Choice — Will must choose between healing his companion and uploading the virus to save Max. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters, Bree
Location: Damaged research center
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Will Uploads the Virus — Will uploads the virus to save Max, sacrificing his own digital existence. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters, Bree
Location: Damaged research center
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Global Blackout — The virus kills Will and causes a worldwide technological collapse and blackout. Characters: Dr. Will Caster, Max Waters
Location: Global network
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The Protected Garden — Max discovers that protected nanoparticles remain in the garden and cleanse oil from water. Characters: Max Waters, Dr. Will Caster
Location: Garden in Berkeley