Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
From New Jersey to Los Angeles
Nick struggles with an advanced art class and an embarrassing first drawing. Chris then persuades him to fly to Los Angeles, opening the way into a very different social world.
Key Events
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Nick Fears a Fatal Shot — Nick reflects that he may be about to die from a bullet and recalls the preceding days. Characters: Nick
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Joins Art Class — Nick signs up for an advanced art class because he is attracted to its teacher. Characters: Nick
Location: New Jersey
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An Embarrassing First Drawing — Nick's first attempt at drawing ends in embarrassment. Characters: Nick
Location: Art class
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Chris Calls from Los Angeles — Chris persuades Nick to fly to Los Angeles and has already bought his ticket. Characters: Nick, Chris
Location: Phone call between New Jersey and Los Angeles
A Case and a Costly Fire
In Los Angeles, Nick meets Kiki and joins Chris's search for the Collarer. The investigation touches possible suspects, while a car fire leaves Chris facing a substantial bill and a short payment deadline.
Key Events
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Nick Enters Chris's World — Nick is drawn into Chris's wealthy and chaotic social life. Characters: Nick, Chris
Location: Los Angeles
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Nick Meets Kiki — Nick meets Kiki, a reporter he encountered during the flight. Characters: Nick, Kiki
Location: Airplane
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Search for the Collarer — Nick becomes involved with Chris and Kiki in the search for the Collarer. Characters: Nick, Chris, Kiki
Location: Los Angeles
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Possible Suspects Emerge — The investigation brings Nick and Chris into contact with Rodman and other possible suspects. Characters: Nick, Chris, Rodman
Location: Unspecified
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Fire at the House — A car catches fire at the house, leaving Chris responsible for a substantial bill. Characters: Chris
Location: Chris's house
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Payment Deadline Looms — Chris has only a few days to pay the bill before charges may be pressed. Characters: Chris
Location: Unspecified
The Portrait Pretence
Nick receives an offer to paint in a particular style but admits to Mom that he cannot really paint and has no examples to follow. He goes to Della's party hoping to see a painting in that style.
Key Events
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Portrait Commission Offered — Someone offers to pay Nick to paint a portrait in a particular style. Characters: Nick
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Admits His Limits — Nick tells Mom that he cannot really paint or find examples of the requested style. Characters: Nick, Mom
Location: Unspecified
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Nick Goes to Della's Party — Nick attends Della's party to see a painting in the style requested for his commission. Characters: Nick, Della
Location: Della's party
Recognition at the Party
Della and her friends treat Nick as a celebrated artist and expect him to produce a major work. After recognizing Vinnie, Nick realizes Della is his former babysitter, now presenting herself with a changed appearance and accent.
Key Events
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Guests Hail Nick as an Artist — Della and her friends praise Nick as a celebrated artist and expect a major work for their home. Characters: Nick, Della
Location: Della's party
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Nick Recognizes Vinnie — Nick unexpectedly recognizes Vinnie, an old acquaintance from New Jersey. Characters: Nick
Location: Della's party
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Della's Past Is Revealed — After speaking with Vinnie, Nick realizes Della is his former babysitter, who changed her appearance and adopted a new accent. Characters: Nick, Della
Location: Della's party