Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A New Lunar Frontier
Technological progress makes tourist flights to the Moon possible. A specially designed spacecraft begins its maiden voyage with prominent passengers aboard.
Key Events
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Tourist Moon Flights Begin — Technological progress makes lunar flights available to tourists.
Location: Earth
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Maiden Voyage Prepared — A specially designed spacecraft prepares for its first flight.
Location: Earth launch facility
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Passengers Board — Business and public figures board, including the American president's wife.
Location: Tourist spacecraft
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Successful Launch — The spacecraft launches without immediate complications.
Location: Earth orbit
The Sunward Crisis
A solar storm strikes the spacecraft and pushes it off course toward the Sun. The surviving scalar motor and the Sun's increasing activity make the danger more severe.
Key Events
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Solar Storm Strikes — A solar storm hits the spacecraft during its journey. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Course Disruption — The solar storm knocks the spacecraft off its intended course. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Flight Toward the Sun — The derailed spacecraft begins heading directly toward the Sun. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Scalar Motor Survives — The scalar motor survives because it is designed for extreme temperatures. Characters: Craig Bakus
Location: Tourist spacecraft
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Hyperactive Sun Emerges — The Sun enters a phase of high hyperactivity. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Radiation Explosions Begin — The hyperactive Sun produces its first radiation explosions. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Near the Sun
Rivals Against Extinction
The threat expands from a spacecraft emergency to a possible extinction event. Don Wincroft and Craig Bakus must overcome their rivalry and cooperate.
Key Events
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Planetary Threat Identified — A collision could heat the Sun enough to kill all life on Earth. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Rivals Join Forces — The rival astronaut and engineer agree to cooperate against the crisis. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Interception Plan Formed — They work toward intercepting the derailing spacecraft before solar impact. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Mission control
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Copied Design Revealed — The spacecraft is revealed to have been copied for another purpose. Characters: Craig Bakus
Location: Mission control
The Military Solution
The history of the copied spacecraft design reveals a military version capable of carrying nuclear weapons. That spacecraft is rebuilt as an interceptor.
Key Events
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Military Conversion Disclosed — The copied design became a spacecraft developed for the United States military. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Mission control
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Nuclear Payload Established — The military spacecraft is described as carrying nuclear weapons into space. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Military spacecraft
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Interceptor Spacecraft Built — The military-derived spacecraft is rebuilt to intercept the first vessel. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Military spacecraft
Interception Before Impact
The rebuilt spacecraft approaches the derailing vessel near the hyperactive Sun. The interception prevents the scalar motor from causing a catastrophic solar explosion.
Key Events
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Interceptor Approaches Target — The rebuilt spacecraft moves toward the derailing tourist spacecraft. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Outer space
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Solar Collision Averted — The interception prevents the scalar motor from colliding with the Sun. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Near the Sun
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Earthwide Extinction Prevented — The avoided explosion prevents the Sun from becoming fatal to life on Earth. Characters: Don Wincroft, Craig Bakus
Location: Earth and outer space