Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The London Assignment & Kidnapping
A notorious mobster vanishes before extradition, prompting authorities to dispatch a lawyer to manage the crisis. The kidnappers send a severed finger to demonstrate their lethal intent, escalating the stakes immediately.
Key Events
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Mobster Kidnapped — Notorious criminal disappears before extradition can proceed. Characters: Ben Larkin
Location: London Streets
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Finger Mailed — Kidnappers send a severed finger to prove their seriousness. Characters: Ben Larkin
Location: Police Station
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Ransom Negotiation — Lawyer attempts to arrange ransom drop logistics. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: London Streets
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Finger Loss Acceptance — Mobster accepts the severed finger as a minor cost. Characters: Ben Larkin
Location: Hospital
The Ransom Scheme & Hitman Pursuit
The lawyer attempts to negotiate the ransom while a contract hitman tails the investigation in a black sports car. Surveillance intensifies as the hitman nearly causes a fatal accident during a high-speed chase.
Key Events
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Ransom Negotiation — Lawyer attempts to arrange ransom drop logistics. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: London Streets
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Hitman Surveillance — Hitman tails target in a black sports car. Characters: Gorman
Location: London Streets
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Near Fatal Shot — Hitman nearly shoots an innocent bystander during pursuit. Characters: Gorman
Location: London Streets
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Ransom Drop — Lawyer personally delivers the ransom payment. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: Drop Site
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Police Friction — Tension rises over weapon regulations and policing styles. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: Police Station
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Jaguar Pursuit — Hitman maneuvers through traffic to maintain surveillance. Characters: Gorman
Location: London Streets
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Ransom Conspiracy — Partners finalize the plan to steal the ransom. Characters: Mel Fields, Ben Larkin
Location: Safe House
The Double Cross & Celebration
The lawyer secretly eliminates the actual kidnappers during the ransom drop, allowing him and the mobster to celebrate a successful financial theft. Their victory is short-lived as authorities raid the safe house.
Key Events
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Ransom Drop — Lawyer personally delivers the ransom payment. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: Drop Site
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Kidnappers Eliminated — Fields secretly eliminates the actual kidnappers. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: Drop Site
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Victory Celebration — Lawyer and mobster celebrate the successful money grab. Characters: Mel Fields, Ben Larkin
Location: Safe House
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Forced Intervention — Authorities burst in to foil the celebration. Characters: Ben Larkin
Location: Safe House
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Vehicle Attack — Hitman attempts to run down targets with his vehicle. Characters: Gorman
Location: London Streets
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Safe House Raid — Forced entry disrupts the celebratory meeting. Characters: Ben Larkin
Location: Safe House
The Final Showdown & Resolution
The hitman launches a desperate vehicle attack to eliminate the survivors, but is ultimately neutralized in a shootout. With the scheme exposed and the threat removed, the remaining figures depart London.
Key Events
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Vehicle Attack — Hitman attempts to run down targets with his vehicle. Characters: Gorman
Location: London Streets
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Hitman Neutralized — Target shoots the hitman during the vehicle chase. Characters: Gorman
Location: London Streets
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Scheme Exposed — The fraudulent ransom plot is fully uncovered. Characters: Ben Larkin, Mel Fields
Location: Police Station
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Extradition Halted — Extradition plans are abandoned due to the chaos. Characters: Ben Larkin
Location: Airport
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Return Home — Lawyer prepares to return to his home base. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: Chicago
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Final Escape — Survivors navigate the aftermath and depart. Characters: Mel Fields
Location: London Streets
A hard-nosed Chicago cop is sent to London to bring back an American mobster being held for extradition. Brannigan in his Irish-American way brings American law to the people of Scotland Yard but has to contend with a stuffy old London first.