Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Wish That Changes Everything
Josh is rejected at the carnival and wishes to be big through the Zoltar machine. He wakes as an adult and loses access to his former home and identity.
Key Events
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Carnival Rejection — Josh tries to impress a girl but is rejected because he is too short. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: Carnival
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The Zoltar Wish — Josh wishes to be big and receives a card stating that his wish is granted. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: Carnival
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The Unplugged Machine — Josh discovers that the fortune-teller machine was unplugged when he made the wish. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: Carnival
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Adult Overnight — Josh wakes up and discovers that he has grown into an adult. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: Josh's home
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The Carnival Disappears — Josh searches for Zoltar but learns that the carnival has moved on. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: Former carnival site
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Home Is No Longer Safe — Josh tries to explain himself, but his mother thinks he is a stranger and chases him away. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: Josh's home
A Child In An Adult World
Billy confirms Josh's identity and helps him understand that finding Zoltar will take weeks. Josh relocates to New York City and begins working at MacMillan Toy Company.
Key Events
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Billy Recognizes Josh — Josh proves his identity to Billy by reciting a song known only to them. Characters: Josh Baskin, Billy
Location: School
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Six Weeks Search — Josh and Billy learn that locating Zoltar again may take at least six weeks. Characters: Josh Baskin, Billy
Location: School
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New York Escape — Josh rents a room in New York City while Billy remains his helper. Characters: Josh Baskin, Billy
Location: New York City
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Toy Company Job — Josh obtains work as a data entry clerk at MacMillan Toy Company. Characters: Josh Baskin
Location: MacMillan Toy Company
Success Among The Toys
Josh impresses MacMillan at FAO Schwarz and challenges the company's conventional toy ideas. His creativity earns him a promotion but also provokes Paul's resentment.
Key Events
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MacMillan Meets Josh — Josh impresses MacMillan with toy insight and enthusiasm during a meeting at FAO Schwarz. Characters: Josh Baskin, MacMillan
Location: FAO Schwarz
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Walking Piano Duet — Josh and MacMillan play duets on the Walking Piano. Characters: Josh Baskin, MacMillan
Location: FAO Schwarz
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Pitch Meeting Challenge — Josh rejects the proposed toy as not fun and inspires new ideas from the team. Characters: Josh Baskin, MacMillan, Paul
Location: MacMillan Toy Company
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Unexpected Promotion — MacMillan promotes Josh to Vice President of Product Development, angering Paul. Characters: Josh Baskin, MacMillan, Paul
Location: MacMillan Toy Company
The Cost Of Growing Up
Josh's romance with Susan deepens while his friendship with Billy receives less attention. Professional pressure and his failed attempt to explain his true identity make him long for childhood.
Key Events
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Josh Meets Susan — Josh attracts Susan's attention while Paul's hostility grows because of their connection. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan, Paul
Location: MacMillan Toy Company
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Adult Life Deepens — Josh spends increasing time with Susan and her friends while seeing Billy less often. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan, Billy
Location: New York City
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The Proposal Pressure — MacMillan asks Josh to create a new toy line, but Josh feels pressured by its business demands. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan, MacMillan
Location: MacMillan Toy Company
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Susan Misreads Josh — Josh says he is a child, but Susan interprets his explanation as fear of commitment. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan
Location: New York City
The Long Way Home
Billy locates Zoltar at Sea Point Park, allowing Josh to reverse the wish. Susan accepts the truth, says goodbye, and helps Josh return to his family and childhood.
Key Events
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Sea Point Revelation — Billy tells Josh that Zoltar is at Sea Point Park, and Susan learns where Josh has gone. Characters: Josh Baskin, Billy, Susan
Location: MacMillan Toy Company
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The Return Wish — Josh finds Zoltar, unplugs it, and wishes to become a child again. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan
Location: Sea Point Park
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Susan Accepts Truth — Susan sees the machine and fortune, realizes Josh was truthful, and understands their relationship will end. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan
Location: Sea Point Park
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Emotional Goodbye — Susan declines to become a child and offers to drive Josh back to New Jersey. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan
Location: Road from Sea Point Park
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Josh Becomes A Child — Josh transforms into a child again after saying goodbye to Susan. Characters: Josh Baskin, Susan
Location: Road from Sea Point Park
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Family Reunion — Josh reunites with his family and Billy after returning to his childhood form. Characters: Josh Baskin, Billy
Location: New Jersey
When a young boy makes a wish at a carnival machine to be big, he wakes up the following morning to find that it has been granted and his body has grown older overnight, but he is still the same 13-year-old boy inside. Now he must learn how to cope with the unfamiliar world of grown-ups, including getting a job and having his first romantic encounter with a woman.