Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
War Against Conscience
War reaches Wredpryd, and the king assigns Count Ferdinand to command a new submarine. Ferdinand is ordered to destroy a civilian liner but refuses after envisioning the human cost.
Key Events
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War Reaches Wredpryd — War breaks out in the previously peaceful kingdom of Wredpryd. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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Submarine Invented — Count Ferdinand is identified as the inventor of a new submarine. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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Battle Command Assigned — The king assigns Count Ferdinand to command the submarine in battle. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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The Sinking Order — The king orders Ferdinand to sink the civilian ship ProPatria. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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Civilian Passengers Revealed — The targeted liner is believed to carry both munitions and civilian passengers. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Submarine
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Vision Of Destruction — Ferdinand imagines the consequences of sending a torpedo into the liner. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Submarine
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Ferdinand Refuses — Ferdinand refuses the order, declaring that he obeys orders from a higher power. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Submarine
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Crew Follows Orders — Ferdinand realizes that his crew will carry out the order despite his refusal. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Submarine
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Fight In The Submarine — Ferdinand fights with the crew to prevent the attack. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Submarine
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Submarine Destroyed — Ferdinand blows up the submarine, sending it to the bottom of the sea. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Sea
Sacrifice Beneath The Sea
Ferdinand fights against the crew's intended action and destroys the submarine. His soul then descends into purgatory after the sacrifice.
Key Events
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Submarine Destroyed — Ferdinand blows up the submarine, sending it to the bottom of the sea. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Sea
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Soul Enters Purgatory — After the submarine's destruction, Ferdinand's soul descends into purgatory. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Purgatory
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A Spiritual Encounter — Ferdinand encounters a spiritual figure who addresses his fate. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Purgatory
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Redemption Through Peace — Ferdinand is told to return as a voice for peace and seek redemption through love of humanity. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Purgatory
A Voice For Peace
A spiritual encounter offers Ferdinand redemption through a return to life and a mission to plead for peace. His countrymen instead stone and condemn him.
Key Events
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Redemption Through Peace — Ferdinand is told to return as a voice for peace and seek redemption through love of humanity. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Purgatory
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Return To Life — Ferdinand returns from death to the living world with a mission to plead for peace. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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Public Rejection — Ferdinand is stoned and reviled by his countrymen after returning to life. Characters: Count Ferdinand
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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Trial Before The King — The king places Ferdinand on trial for refusing the wartime order. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Royal court
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Death Sentence — Ferdinand is sentenced to death after the trial. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Royal court
The Mothers' Appeal
Ferdinand receives a death sentence from the king. Five thousand women gather at the palace, and their song of peace moves the king toward the prison.
Key Events
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Death Sentence — Ferdinand is sentenced to death after the trial. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Royal court
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Women Gather For Peace — Five thousand women gather at the palace, singing for peace and an end to the war. Characters: The King of Wredpryd
Location: Palace
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The King Is Moved — The mothers' plea inspires the king to visit the condemned prisoner. Characters: The King of Wredpryd
Location: Palace
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Empty Cell — The king visits Ferdinand's cell and finds that the condemned count has died. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Prison cell
The Battlefield Reckoning
The king finds Ferdinand dead and is confronted with the consequences of his rule. A tour through the battlefield carnage leads to a peace treaty and the soldiers' return.
Key Events
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Empty Cell — The king visits Ferdinand's cell and finds that the condemned count has died. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Prison cell
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Spiritual Presence Emerges — A spiritual presence emerges from Ferdinand's body and confronts the king with his responsibility. Characters: The King of Wredpryd, Count Ferdinand
Location: Prison cell
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Tour Of The Battlefields — The king is taken across the battlefields to witness the consequences of his rule. Characters: The King of Wredpryd
Location: Battlefields
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War Becomes Hell — The battlefield tour reveals carnage and condemns the destruction created under the king's reign. Characters: The King of Wredpryd
Location: Battlefields
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Peace Treaty Signed — A peace treaty is signed after the king confronts the consequences of war. Characters: The King of Wredpryd
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd
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Soldiers Return Home — The closing scenes depict happiness awaiting the returning soldiers. Characters: The King of Wredpryd
Location: Kingdom of Wredpryd