Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Sacrificial Clerk
Bart Carter sacrifices his writing ambitions to work as a clerk, dedicating his income to his wife and five children. His domestic life is stable but creatively stifling, setting the stage for a disruptive change.
Key Events
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Bart's Clerical Sacrifice — Bart works as a clerk to support his wife and five children. Characters: Bart Carter
Location: New York City publishing house
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Mildred's Return to States — Former girlfriend Mildred returns from the Paris office. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: New York City
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Salary Arrangement for Writing — Mildred arranges for Bart to draw salary while writing his novel. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Publishing house
The Parisian Catalyst
Mildred Bronson returns from Paris and arranges for Bart to draw his salary while writing his novel. Daily proximity at her apartment and frequent dinners rekindle their old romantic connection.
Key Events
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Salary Arrangement for Writing — Mildred arranges for Bart to draw salary while writing his novel. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Publishing house
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Writing at Mildred's Apartment — Bart writes daily and frequently stays for dinner. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Mildred's apartment
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Revival of Old Feelings — Old romantic feelings between the two are rekindled. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Mildred's apartment
The French Exile
Seed achieves critical and commercial success, prompting Bart to abandon his family and relocate to France with Mildred. Peggy opens a dress shop to raise the children alone during this decade-long separation.
Key Events
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Publication of Seed Novel — Bart's novel Seed is officially published. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Publishing house
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Critical and Commercial Success — Seed achieves critical acclaim and financial triumph. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Publishing house
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Abandonment of Family — Bart leaves his wife and children behind for France. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: New York City
The Decade of Silence
Ten years pass as both families adapt to solitude. The children grow up without their father, while Peggy struggles to maintain stability through her business.
Key Events
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Abandonment of Family — Bart leaves his wife and children behind for France. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: New York City
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Relocation to France — The couple moves to France to pursue their new life. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: France
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Peggy Opens Dress Shop — Peggy opens a dress shop to raise the five children alone. Characters: Peggy Carter
Location: New York City
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A Decade of Separation — Ten years pass with the families living apart. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred, Peggy Carter
Location: France / New York
The New York Reckoning
Bart and Mildred return to New York, where the grown children eagerly welcome their father. Bart proposes extensive amends, but Peggy's reluctance and Mildred's insecurity create a tense, unresolved conclusion.
Key Events
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A Decade of Separation — Ten years pass with the families living apart. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred, Peggy Carter
Location: France / New York
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Return to New York — The married couple returns after a decade abroad. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: New York City
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Children's Joyful Reunion — Grown children express delight at seeing their father. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred, Peggy Carter
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Bart's Amends Proposal — Bart suggests educational and employment plans for the kids. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred, Peggy Carter
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Margaret's Finishing School Plan — Bart proposes enrolling daughter Margaret in finishing school. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Twins' Harvard Enrollment Plan — Bart plans to send the twin boys to Harvard University. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Oldest Son's Employment Plan — Bart offers to find employment for his oldest son. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Youngest Boy's Relocation Plan — Bart suggests the youngest boy live with him and Mildred. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Peggy's Reluctant Agreement — Peggy agrees under children's urging but fears losing them. Characters: Peggy Carter
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Mildred's Assurance to Peggy — Mildred promises the children will eventually return to Peggy. Characters: Mildred
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Mildred's Marital Insecurity — Mildred worries Bart's renewed bond with Peggy threatens their marriage. Characters: Mildred
Location: Peggy's apartment
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Open-Ended Family Reconciliation — The family faces an uncertain future with divided loyalties. Characters: Bart Carter, Mildred, Peggy Carter
Location: New York City
Bart is a clerk for a publishing company; he has written a novel. His wife Peggy and he have five children. Bart's former girlfriend Mildred is manager of the company's Paris office. She manages to get the novel published and talks Bart into marrying her after he divorces Peggy. Initially successful, Bart must turn to writing trash to keep Mildred in money. When he sees how well his four sons and daughter Margaret have grown without his help, he asks Peggy to let them all come live with him and Mildred. Peggy agrees, but the arrival of his beloved children puts Mildred's future in jeopardy. Written by Ed Stephan