Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Society of Measured Worth
The story introduces a 2035 Europe where health and productive ability determine each citizen's Sustainability Index. The index divides people into classes and shapes access to society.
Key Events
-
Europe in 2035 — The story is set in 2035, within a society organized around sustainability measurements.
Location: United States of Europe
-
The Sustainability Index — Every citizen receives a Sustainability Index based on health and productive abilities.
Location: United States of Europe
-
Classes of Citizenship — The index divides people into social classes according to their sustainability.
Location: United States of Europe
-
Eve Seeks a Future — Eve joins an unnamed man in trying to enter Europe illegally for their expected child. Characters: Eve
Location: Outside the United States of Europe
The Forbidden Crossing
Eve and an unnamed man attempt to enter the United States of Europe illegally for the future of their expected child. They complete a long and desperate journey and cross the border.
Key Events
-
The Desperate Journey — Eve and the man endure a long and desperate journey toward the border. Characters: Eve
Location: The route toward the European border
-
Crossing the Border — The pair succeeds in crossing the border into the United States of Europe. Characters: Eve
Location: European border
-
Immigration Police Capture — After crossing the border, Eve and the man are captured by immigration police. Characters: Eve
Location: Inside the United States of Europe
-
Temporary Detention Center — The captured migrants are confined in a temporary detention center. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
Detention and Separation
Immigration police capture the pair and place them in a temporary detention center. The authorities forcibly separate them, turning their hoped-for future into a crisis.
Key Events
-
Forced Separation — The authorities forcibly separate Eve from the man during detention. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
-
Pregnancy Becomes a Liability — Eve's pregnancy causes the authorities to classify her as unsustainable. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
-
Expulsion Decision — Because she is considered unsustainable, Eve is designated for expulsion. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
-
Sustainability as Control — The detention crisis exposes how health and productivity determine a person's social status. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
The Cost of Sustainability
Eve's pregnancy leads authorities to classify her as unsustainable and mark her for expulsion. The system presents integration as possible only through becoming sustainable and reaching Index Zero.
Key Events
-
Sustainability as Control — The detention crisis exposes how health and productivity determine a person's social status. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
-
The Price of Integration — The only stated path to integration is becoming sustainable within the index system. Characters: Eve
Location: United States of Europe
-
Reaching Index Zero — Achieving Index Zero is presented as the necessary condition for integration. Characters: Eve
Location: United States of Europe
-
An Uncertain Future — Eve's pregnancy, detention, and threatened expulsion place the future of her expected child in jeopardy. Characters: Eve
Location: Temporary detention center
-
The Sustainability Dilemma — The premise culminates in the conflict between human hope and a system that ranks people by utility. Characters: Eve
Location: United States of Europe