Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Romantic Problem
An awkward cousin cannot get a girl. A formidable rival stands between him and the desired romance.
Key Events
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The Lovelorn Cousin — A squeaky-voiced, awkward cousin is presented as unable to attract a girl.
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The Desired Girl — The cousin becomes interested in a pretty girl.
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A Formidable Rival — The girl is associated with an accomplished rival skilled with guns, boxing, and horses.
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The Cousin's Intervention — The forceful cousin decides to intervene in the romantic problem.
The Benevolent Scheme
A forceful cousin takes control and designs a plan to help the awkward man. His methods are calculated to separate the girl from her rival.
Key Events
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A Bold Scheme — The benevolent schemer begins manufacturing a plan to help the awkward cousin win the girl.
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Pressure on the Cousin — The schemer browbeats his cousin while attempting to advance the romantic plot.
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The Rival Foiled — The plan is calculated to separate the girl from her accomplished rival.
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The Doofy Reaction — The awkward cousin is repeatedly flustered by the schemer's aggressive methods.
Plots Under Pressure
The scheme produces repeated complications and flusters its intended beneficiary. The accomplished rival serves as an effective foil to the plotting.
Key Events
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Schemes Multiply — The central comic strategy develops through increasingly elaborate plotting.
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The Rival Responds — The accomplished rival functions as a strong foil against the schemer's plans.
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Comic Complications — The schemes create comic complications instead of producing a simple romantic victory.
Pastry-Filled Reckoning
The controlling schemer's authority is punctured when he becomes the target of gooey pastries. The short closes with farcical disorder surrounding the romantic plan.
Key Events
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The Despot Exposed — The benevolent despot's controlling style becomes a central source of comic disorder.
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Pastry Ambush — The schemer becomes the target of two gooey pastries.
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Plans in Disarray — The pastry attack undercuts the schemer's authority and intensifies the farcical chaos.
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Comic Resolution — The short concludes as a comic vehicle centered on the schemer's attempts to secure the girl for his cousin.
Walter Catlett is the cousin to some squeaky voiced Dagwood Bumstead type who can't get a girl. Can he browbeat his cousin into swiping pretty girl from accomplished gunman, boxer, and horseman Franklin Pangborn (!?), or is that just DREAM STUFF?