Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Risky Company and a New Connection
Mike's financially troubled company faces a buyout offer, which he rejects because he expects far greater value. At the same time, he meets Ellen and their cautious connection begins.
Key Events
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The Company Struggles — Mike's technology company is struggling financially, though he believes its dot-com business will become valuable. Characters: Mike Lau
Location: San Francisco
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Bob Presents an Offer — Bob discusses an offer for 51 percent of the company for $50 million. Characters: Mike Lau, Bob
Location: Company setting
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Mike Rejects the Offer — Mike rejects the offer, saying he will not accept less than $10 billion. Characters: Mike Lau, Bob
Location: Company setting
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Virginia's Arrival Is Announced — Bob warns Mike that Virginia is coming to San Francisco. Characters: Mike Lau, Bob, Virginia Chow
Location: Company setting
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Mike Meets Ellen — Mike meets Ellen, and they begin forming a close but uncertain connection. Characters: Mike Lau, Ellen
Location: San Francisco
Private Lives Draw Closer
Mike and Ellen reveal their past hurts and hesitation about commitment. Ellen worries about Scott, while Mike struggles to share his private life; Tina offers Ellen practical and personal encouragement.
Key Events
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Past Hurts Surface — Their conversations reveal that both have been hurt and are wary of commitment. Characters: Mike Lau, Ellen
Location: San Francisco
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Ellen Raises Scott Alone — Ellen's life as a divorced mother raising her ten-year-old son becomes clear. Characters: Ellen, Scott
Location: Ellen's home
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Ellen Weighs Scott's Needs — Ellen worries about what a new relationship might mean for Scott. Characters: Ellen, Scott
Location: Ellen's home
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Mike Guards His Privacy — Mike is reluctant to let anyone into his home and private life. Characters: Mike Lau, Ellen
Location: Mike's home
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Mike Spends Time with Scott — Despite their hesitation, Mike and Ellen keep seeing each other, and Mike becomes involved with Scott. Characters: Mike Lau, Ellen, Scott
Location: San Francisco
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Tina Helps Ellen — Tina helps care for Scott and encourages Ellen to consider what she wants. Characters: Tina, Ellen, Scott
Location: Ellen's family circle
Virginia's Promising Approach
Virginia arrives to discuss the company, praises Mike, and acknowledges that she previously influenced bankers against lending to him. Mike tries to manage negotiations while remaining present in Scott's life.
Key Events
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Virginia Discusses the Company — Virginia arrives, praises Mike's talent, and says she wants more open communication. Characters: Mike Lau, Virginia Chow
Location: San Francisco
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Virginia Admits Past Influence — Virginia says she previously influenced bankers not to lend to Mike. Characters: Mike Lau, Virginia Chow
Location: San Francisco
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Mike Balances Business and Family — Mike's attention is divided between negotiations and watching Scott play baseball. Characters: Mike Lau, Scott, Virginia Chow
Location: Baseball game
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Virginia Controls the Contract — Virginia says the contract is under her control, and her offer appears promising. Characters: Mike Lau, Virginia Chow
Location: Company setting
The Offer Turns Against Mike
Mike discovers that the acquisition announcement requires him to leave the board. Bob warns that C&G may be seeking full control and trying to push Mike out, and urges him not to sell his shares.
Key Events
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Board Departure Requirement — Mike learns that the acquisition announcement requires him to leave the board. Characters: Mike Lau, Bob, Virginia Chow
Location: Company setting
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C&G Seeks Full Ownership — Bob says C&G intends to take full ownership and may be using negotiations to push Mike out. Characters: Mike Lau, Bob
Location: Company setting
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Bob Urges Mike Not to Sell — Bob urges Mike to keep his shares, while Mike initially says he has no choice. Characters: Mike Lau, Bob
Location: Company setting
An Unresolved Refusal
Mike changes course and insists that he will not sell. The company's future and his relationship with Ellen remain unsettled in the available account.
Key Events
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Mike Changes Course — Mike changes his position and insists that he will not sell. Characters: Mike Lau
Location: Company setting
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Two Futures Remain Unsettled — The account ends with the company's future and Mike's relationship with Ellen unresolved. Characters: Mike Lau, Ellen
Location: San Francisco