Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
A Chance to Start Again
Floyd and Mitchell’s past hardship is established as Floyd finds his former partner after their release. They decide to attempt a robbery in hopes of securing a new start.
Key Events
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Flight from Police — Two men flee a police chase and struggle to reach their car. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified getaway route
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Fifteen-Year-Old Disaster — Floyd reflects on a past disaster that led to prison and damaged their prospects. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified
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Floyd Finds Mitchell — After release, Floyd tracks down Mitchell, who is scraping by in a pound shop. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Pound shop
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A Risky New Start — Floyd argues that they need money and a chance to start over. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified
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The Robbery Plan — The former partners plan a robbery to raise enough money to begin again. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified
The Missing Money
The robbery escape appears successful until the money disappears. Suspicion about the getaway driver leads into a series of coercive situations arranged around money and endangered people.
Key Events
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Money Disappears — Their escape seems successful, but the money vanishes and they suspect betrayal. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified escape route
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Forced Choices Begin — They encounter a person in danger, money, and a threat controlled by a captor. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified location
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Deadlines and Threats — The captor imposes deadlines and watches their decisions as the ordeal continues. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: A series of unspecified locations
Kelly's Impossible Choice
The captor's timed threats force Floyd and Mitchell to choose between money and a person in danger. Floyd recognizes Kelly as his niece, but they leave her behind in the trap.
Key Events
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Kelly Is Recognized — Floyd recognizes Kelly, his niece, among the people placed in danger. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell, Kelly
Location: Unspecified trap location
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Kelly Left Behind — Mitchell argues for taking the money; they leave Kelly behind in the trap. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell, Kelly
Location: Unspecified trap location
Brothers at the Countdown
The scheme places Mitchell’s brother Gary in danger and makes taking the money a threat to his survival. Mitchell stays with Gary while Floyd runs, and the excerpt ends with Floyd suspecting the driver’s involvement.
Key Events
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Gary in the Scheme — Floyd and Mitchell encounter Mitchell’s brother Gary caught in the scheme. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell, Gary
Location: Unspecified location
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The Money's Consequence — They explain that taking the money will trigger the device threatening Gary. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell, Gary
Location: Unspecified location
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Mitchell Stays — Mitchell refuses to leave Gary, while Floyd is forced to run by the countdown. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell, Gary
Location: Unspecified location
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Gary's Accusation — Gary taunts Mitchell about understanding what it feels like to be abandoned. Characters: Mitchell, Gary
Location: Unspecified location
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Driver's Involvement Suspected — As they flee, Floyd realizes the getaway driver was involved; the outcome is unresolved. Characters: Floyd, Mitchell
Location: Unspecified escape route