Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Fetus In The Tumor
Karen seeks medical treatment for a growing neck tumor. The failed operation and repeated phrase shift the problem from medicine toward the supernatural.
Key Events
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Karen Seeks Treatment — Karen seeks treatment for a growing tumor on her neck. Characters: Karen Tandy, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: San Francisco hospital
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The Tumor Is A Fetus — X-rays lead Dr. Hughes to identify the tumor as a growing fetus. Characters: Karen Tandy, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: Hospital examination room
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Surgery Goes Wrong — The surgeon's shaking hands cause him to cut his own hand. Characters: Karen Tandy, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: Hospital operating room
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The Sleep Phrase — Karen speaks a strange phrase in her sleep, then denies knowing it. Characters: Harry Erskine, Karen Tandy
Location: Harry's residence
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A Client Repeats It — A client repeats Karen's phrase during a seizure and falls down the stairs. Characters: Harry Erskine
Location: Harry's fortune-telling room
Secrets Behind The Seance
Harry gathers occult assistance and attempts a seance at Karen's home. The storm and the wooden Indian-like figure suggest an ancient hostile presence.
Key Events
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A Client Repeats It — A client repeats Karen's phrase during a seizure and falls down the stairs. Characters: Harry Erskine
Location: Harry's fortune-telling room
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Occult Consultation — Harry consults occult specialists about the force afflicting Karen. Characters: Harry Erskine, MacArthur, Mrs. Karmann
Location: Private consultation space
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Seance At Karen's Home — The group holds a seance to draw the attacking spirit from Karen. Characters: Harry Erskine, Karen Tandy, MacArthur, Mrs. Karmann
Location: Karen's home
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The Wooden Figure — A violent storm disrupts the seance, and Mrs. Karmann describes an Indian-like wooden figure. Characters: Harry Erskine, Karen Tandy, MacArthur, Mrs. Karmann
Location: Karen's home
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Searching For Ancient Knowledge — Harry seeks an explanation for the phrase and the ancient medicine-man legend. Characters: Harry Erskine
Location: Anthropological consultation
The Medicine Man's Warning
Harry searches for historical and spiritual explanations before approaching John Singing Rock. John eventually agrees to help for money and tobacco.
Key Events
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John Rejects The Plea — John explains manitou spirits but initially refuses Harry's request for help. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock
Location: John Singing Rock's location
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The Price Of Help — John changes his mind and requests money and tobacco for his services. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock
Location: John Singing Rock's location
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The Sand Circle — Harry and John draw a sand circle around Karen's bed to confine the spirit. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Karen Tandy, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: Hospital room
The Hospital Under Siege
The sand circle exposes Misquamacus and his revenge motive. His attacks kill, reanimate, freeze, and injure people throughout the hospital.
Key Events
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The Sand Circle — Harry and John draw a sand circle around Karen's bed to confine the spirit. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Karen Tandy, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: Hospital room
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Misquamacus Revealed — Through Karen, Misquamacus reveals his identity and revenge against white invaders. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Karen Tandy, Misquamacus
Location: Hospital room
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John Calls The Manitou — John calls upon other manitou, but they fail to stop Misquamacus's growing power. Characters: John Singing Rock, Misquamacus, Karen Tandy
Location: Hospital room
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The Spirit Emerges — Misquamacus kills a male nurse and claws out from Karen's neck as a small man. Characters: Misquamacus, Karen Tandy, John Singing Rock
Location: Hospital room
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The Dead Are Reanimated — Misquamacus reanimates the dead nurse, but John manages to thwart the attack. Characters: Misquamacus, John Singing Rock
Location: Hospital corridor
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The Circle Is Erased — A summoned demon erases the sand circle and wounds Dr. Hughes. Characters: Misquamacus, John Singing Rock, Dr. Jack Hughes, Harry Erskine
Location: Hospital room
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The Frozen Hospital Floor — Harry returns to find the floor covered in ice and the receptionist frozen solid. Characters: Harry Erskine, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: Lower hospital levels
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John's Surgical Wounds — John explains that Misquamacus inflicted wounds on his face with surgical instruments. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock
Location: Hospital room
Machines Against The Void
Harry and John devise a plan involving the hospital's electrical equipment. After a portal opens, Karen awakens and channels the machine manitou to end the threat.
Key Events
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John's Surgical Wounds — John explains that Misquamacus inflicted wounds on his face with surgical instruments. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock
Location: Hospital room
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The Snowstorm Attack — Misquamacus appears amid a supernatural snowstorm, and Harry weakens him with a typewriter. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Misquamacus
Location: Hospital corridor
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The Machine Manitou Plan — Harry proposes using the manitou of hospital equipment, with John serving as a medium. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock
Location: Hospital room
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The Earthquake Portal — A violent earthquake signals a portal opened by Misquamacus for a supreme demon. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Misquamacus
Location: Hospital room
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Hospital Machines Activate — Harry instructs Hughes to switch on all hospital machines while he and John approach Misquamacus. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Dr. Jack Hughes
Location: Hospital
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The Machine Manitou Fails — The room becomes a starry void, but John initially fails to channel the machine manitou. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Karen Tandy, Misquamacus
Location: Karen's hospital room
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Karen Defeats Misquamacus — Karen awakens, channels the machine manitou, defeats Misquamacus, and banishes the summoned demon. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Karen Tandy, Misquamacus
Location: Karen's hospital room
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Farewell At The Airport — Harry and Karen reunite, while John leaves and warns that Misquamacus's soul survives. Characters: Harry Erskine, John Singing Rock, Karen Tandy
Location: Airport departure area