Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
Murder Behind Closed Doors
Gail enters the London apartment to retrieve belongings and is killed by a masked attacker. Meanwhile, the singer faces pressure to resume his recording career.
Key Events
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Gail Enters Apartment — Gail enters the apartment to remove valuable belongings from her former marriage. Characters: Gail
Location: London apartment
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Reporter Calls Gail — A reporter asks Gail about the divorce and the singer's delayed next album. Characters: Gail
Location: London apartment
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Masked Attack — Mr. B, disguised as a masked old woman, attacks Gail with a sickle. Characters: Gail, Mr. B
Location: London apartment
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Album Pressure Returns — Webster pressures the singer to resume recording after a six-year hiatus. Characters: Webster Jones
Location: New York recording setting
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Linda Meets Singer — Linda's strong attraction to the singer becomes apparent while she works for Webster. Characters: Linda Everett, Webster Jones
Location: Recording business setting
The Manor's Uneasy Welcome
The singer relocates to the Surrey manor and begins working on his album. Visions of Gail, Harry's disappearance, and Linda's complicated history increase his uncertainty.
Key Events
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Linda Meets Singer — Linda's strong attraction to the singer becomes apparent while she works for Webster. Characters: Linda Everett, Webster Jones
Location: Recording business setting
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Move To Surrey Manor — The singer moves into the manor overseen by Mrs. B and Mr. B. Characters: Linda Everett, Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Gail's Apparitions Begin — The singer begins seeing visions of Gail while unaware that she has been murdered. Characters: Gail, Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Recording At Manor — The singer works on the album while Linda and Webster remain connected to the recording project. Characters: Linda Everett, Webster Jones
Location: Surrey manor
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Harry Disappears — Harry goes missing during the album recording period, later revealed as a murder. Characters: Harry Cunningham, Mr. B, Mrs. B
Location: Surrey manor area
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Past Relationship Revealed — The singer discovers that Linda formerly dated Webster, complicating their developing relationship. Characters: Linda Everett, Webster Jones
Location: Surrey manor
Evidence Beneath The Horror
The singer investigates strange noises and discovers Gail's severed head, leading to catatonia and hospitalization. Linda later disappears after their relationship becomes intimate.
Key Events
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Strange Noises Investigated — The singer investigates disturbing noises inside the manor during the night. Characters: Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Severed Head Found — The singer discovers Gail's severed, decomposing head, triggering a psychological collapse. Characters: Gail, Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Hospital Admission — The singer enters a catatonic state and is temporarily admitted to a hospital.
Location: Hospital
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Linda Disappears — Linda disappears the day after consummating her relationship with the singer. Characters: Linda Everett, Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Return To Apartment — The singer finds the apartment disinfected and its carpeting replaced without authorization.
Location: London apartment
The Housekeeper's Deception
The altered London apartment deepens the mystery, while Mrs. B dismisses the singer's concerns. A second attack forces the hidden conspiracy into the open.
Key Events
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Return To Apartment — The singer finds the apartment disinfected and its carpeting replaced without authorization.
Location: London apartment
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Mrs B Dismisses Concerns — The singer discusses the altered apartment with Mrs. B, who tells him not to worry. Characters: Mrs. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Hag Attacks Again — The masked old woman attacks the singer again before he escapes and encounters Mrs. B. Characters: Mr. B, Mrs. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Revenge Motive Revealed — Mrs. B reveals the murders, the disguise, and revenge for her daughter's suicide. Characters: Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
Revenge And Rescue
Mrs. B explains the couple's revenge and Mr. B's disguise. Mrs. B dies accidentally, Linda is found alive inside the walls, and the police remove Mr. B.
Key Events
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Mrs B Fatally Wounded — Mr. B attacks again, but the singer ducks and Mrs. B receives the fatal wound. Characters: Mrs. B, Mr. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Webster Calls Police — Webster arrives, sees the aftermath, and calls the police while Mr. B cradles Mrs. B. Characters: Webster Jones, Mr. B, Mrs. B
Location: Surrey manor
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Linda Found In Walls — Tapping leads the singer to Linda, who has been entombed inside the walls. Characters: Linda Everett, Mr. B, Mrs. B
Location: Surrey manor walls
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Police Remove Mr B — The police arrive and take Mr. B away after the crimes are exposed. Characters: Mr. B, Webster Jones
Location: Surrey manor exterior
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Gail's Ghost Appears — After escaping the manor, the singer sees Gail's ghost waving from an upper window. Characters: Gail, Linda Everett
Location: Surrey manor exterior