Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Creative Mandate
Welles secures full creative control while Herman begins dictating the screenplay. Houseman and Rita monitor the progress and structural challenges.
Key Events
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Welles Receives Creative Freedom — Welles is granted full creative control for his next film. Characters: Orson Welles
Location: RKO Office
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Herman Dictates Screenplay — Rita transcribes Herman's script while tracking progress. Characters: Rita Alexander
Location: Victorville Cabin
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Houseman Reviews Draft — Houseman expresses concern over the screenplay's nonlinear structure. Characters: John Houseman, Rita Alexander
Location: Production Office
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Rita Notices Kane Parallels — Rita identifies similarities between the script and Hearst. Characters: Rita Alexander
Location: Victorville Cabin
Hollywood's Political Web
Mayer hosts elite gatherings as the studio launches a smear campaign against Sinclair. Thalberg coordinates resources while Metcalf faces guilt over propaganda.
Key Events
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Mayer Hosts Birthday Party — Mayer throws a lavish party attended by Hollywood elites. Characters: Louis B. Mayer, Marion Davies
Location: Hearst Castle
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Davies and Herman Bond — Davies and Herman discuss politics and the film industry. Characters: Marion Davies
Location: Hearst Castle Gardens
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Sinclair Campaign Launches — Studio executives begin opposing the gubernatorial candidate. Characters: Louis B. Mayer, Irving Thalberg
Location: Studio Lot
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Propaganda Films Produced — The studio creates smear campaign films funded by Hearst. Characters: Louis B. Mayer, Shelly Metcalf, Irving Thalberg
Location: MGM Studios
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Metcalf's Suicide — Metcalf takes his life after guilt over the smear campaign. Characters: Shelly Metcalf
Location: Trocadero Nightclub
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Election Night Results — Mayer announces Frank Merriam's victory over Sinclair. Characters: Louis B. Mayer
Location: Trocadero Nightclub
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Thalberg Coordinates Smear — Thalberg manages studio resources against the political campaign. Characters: Irving Thalberg
Location: Studio Executive Office
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Mayer Controls Studio Brass — Mayer consolidates power over studio executives and campaigns. Characters: Louis B. Mayer
Location: MGM Headquarters
The Castle Confrontation
Herman crashes a Hearst party and drunkenly attacks Hearst's political hypocrisy. Mayer publicly humiliates him, escalating studio tensions.
Key Events
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Election Night Results — Mayer announces Frank Merriam's victory over Sinclair. Characters: Louis B. Mayer
Location: Trocadero Nightclub
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Herman Crashes Hearst Party — Herman drunkenly confronts Hearst about political hypocrisy. Characters: Louis B. Mayer, Marion Davies
Location: Hearst Castle
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Mayer's Public Humiliation — Mayer reveals Herman's payroll status and insults him. Characters: Louis B. Mayer, Marion Davies
Location: Hearst Castle
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Houseman Monitors Deadline — Houseman grows impatient as the deadline approaches. Characters: John Houseman, Rita Alexander
Location: Production Office
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Screenplay Completed — Herman finishes the script just in time for submission. Characters: Rita Alexander
Location: Victorville Cabin
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Houseman Warns of No Credit — Houseman reminds Herman he will receive no official credit. Characters: John Houseman
Location: Production Office
The Credit Battle
The screenplay is completed under deadline pressure. Welles offers a buyout, but Herman demands joint credit, leading to a heated negotiation.
Key Events
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Screenplay Completed — Herman finishes the script just in time for submission. Characters: Rita Alexander
Location: Victorville Cabin
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Welles Offers Buyout — Welles attempts to buy out Herman's contract terms. Characters: Orson Welles
Location: Herman's Residence
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Herman Demands Credit — Herman insists on joint credit, declaring it his greatest work. Characters: Orson Welles
Location: Herman's Residence
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Welles Leaves Angrily — Welles departs after the heated credit negotiation. Characters: Orson Welles
Location: Herman's Residence
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Davies Tries to Persuade — Davies attempts to convince Herman to alter the screenplay. Characters: Marion Davies
Location: Herman's Residence
Legacy and Recognition
Despite studio resistance and personal sacrifices, the film wins the Academy Award. The creative struggle resolves into historical vindication.
Key Events
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Award Ceremony Victory — Welles and Herman win Best Original Screenplay two years later. Characters: Orson Welles
Location: Academy Awards Hall
1930s Hollywood is reevaluated through the eyes of scathing social critic and alcoholic screenwriter Herman J. Mankiewicz as he races to finish the screenplay of Citizen Kane.